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Queen Bee👠
*an erotic triple-Sonnet*
(I, as a Domme with my male submissive, reminisce about our fetish lifestyle.)
You speak intensely, yearningly to me,
Your passion is to crawl inside of me.
To grow within the wanton womb of me,
And clone yourself for every hole in me.
I liken it to living in a hive,
Not me of course, but you a worker, strive.
And with distorted body, your queen, thrive,
While larvae young in honeycomb, alive.
You want to be my menstrual cycle phase,
To drink it down, the spume for when we bathe.
Mixed in with amber essences we save,
And share between, the rhythm of our crave.
With fetishes, we welcome every kind,
In nightly marathons to seek and find.
Delicious is our sense of how we rave,
I'd give you special license as my slave.
Rewarding you each time you'd misbehave,
As long as you could take all that I gave.
And give to you your Mistress's release,
Onto your head to swirl all thru’ your fleece.
Or down your face to glaze that oral crease,
And everywhere I squirt, your part & piece.
To stay completely nude in every way,
Prepared for beck and call when e'er I say.
To be the best of me and never stray,
And be a proper pupil every day.
On special nights the cuffs are set aside,
To let my ponyboy be free to ride.
At toilet, when we set a dinner date,
And dress for the occasion's formal fête.
To place beneath my puckering a plate,
With flatware serving morsels that you ate.
And then, the darker spectrum when we fuck,
Each one more twisted as we bite and suck.
The taboo acts of insert, swell and tuck,
Will always have us stretching wide our luck.
Like exhibitionism to the hilt,
Another form of sex play without guilt.
In public spectacle they watch and tilt,
To speculate how our sex life is built.
There never seems an ending to our want,
When darkest pleasures' deepest places haunt.
Original mousework art “Pony Boy” by Jade Pandora.
Copyright © 2016-2018 Jade Pandora. All Rights Reserved.
(I, as a Domme with my male submissive, reminisce about our fetish lifestyle.)
You speak intensely, yearningly to me,
Your passion is to crawl inside of me.
To grow within the wanton womb of me,
And clone yourself for every hole in me.
I liken it to living in a hive,
Not me of course, but you a worker, strive.
And with distorted body, your queen, thrive,
While larvae young in honeycomb, alive.
You want to be my menstrual cycle phase,
To drink it down, the spume for when we bathe.
Mixed in with amber essences we save,
And share between, the rhythm of our crave.
With fetishes, we welcome every kind,
In nightly marathons to seek and find.
Delicious is our sense of how we rave,
I'd give you special license as my slave.
Rewarding you each time you'd misbehave,
As long as you could take all that I gave.
And give to you your Mistress's release,
Onto your head to swirl all thru’ your fleece.
Or down your face to glaze that oral crease,
And everywhere I squirt, your part & piece.
To stay completely nude in every way,
Prepared for beck and call when e'er I say.
To be the best of me and never stray,
And be a proper pupil every day.
On special nights the cuffs are set aside,
To let my ponyboy be free to ride.
At toilet, when we set a dinner date,
And dress for the occasion's formal fête.
To place beneath my puckering a plate,
With flatware serving morsels that you ate.
And then, the darker spectrum when we fuck,
Each one more twisted as we bite and suck.
The taboo acts of insert, swell and tuck,
Will always have us stretching wide our luck.
Like exhibitionism to the hilt,
Another form of sex play without guilt.
In public spectacle they watch and tilt,
To speculate how our sex life is built.
There never seems an ending to our want,
When darkest pleasures' deepest places haunt.
Original mousework art “Pony Boy” by Jade Pandora.
Copyright © 2016-2018 Jade Pandora. All Rights Reserved.
Published 11th Oct 2018
| Edited 5th Dec 2019
Author's Note
First-time published.
12/05/19 Update: a proud trophy winner by public vote.
12/05/19 Update: a proud trophy winner by public vote.
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11th Oct 2018 9:06pm
Very tight pentameter throughout; interesting rhyme scheme - I don't know why you chose it, though. The only criticism is the use of the word pate, if that isn't too unfriendly; for me, it didn't seem to fit.
Thank you very much, Bystander, for coming in for a read & your comment.
And no, your mention and questioning as to one word choice, didn’t seem unfriendly to me. In fact, the word pate I’d used in an abstract way. But I’m glad you brought it up. I figured if it’s too obscure to even one reader, then it was time I do better.
I made a change I’m happier with, if you will honor me with a reread.
As for the rhyme scheme, no of course you couldn’t know my reason. I simply liked doing it this way; a friendly challenge to my own abilities.
I hope I’ll hear from you again some time with any other intrigue that creeps up from any of my ink.
~Jade👠
And no, your mention and questioning as to one word choice, didn’t seem unfriendly to me. In fact, the word pate I’d used in an abstract way. But I’m glad you brought it up. I figured if it’s too obscure to even one reader, then it was time I do better.
I made a change I’m happier with, if you will honor me with a reread.
As for the rhyme scheme, no of course you couldn’t know my reason. I simply liked doing it this way; a friendly challenge to my own abilities.
I hope I’ll hear from you again some time with any other intrigue that creeps up from any of my ink.
~Jade👠
12th Oct 2018 9:33pm
Thanks for the dialogue JT, I'm a sucker for form 'cos I realise how hard it is to pull off which you do so well. I wondered if pate had any other meanings that I'd missed; the OED (online) wasn't forthcoming. As for your change, flattered and embarrassed that you took heed.
Looking forward to reading more of your work ...
Looking forward to reading more of your work ...
11th Oct 2018 9:34pm
Nice flow to the rhyme Jade. I really Love the fetish theme...you covered many deviant acts here.
The dinner date reference...got me intrigued. The only thing you left out was a....speculum.
Dark Sun.
The dinner date reference...got me intrigued. The only thing you left out was a....speculum.
Dark Sun.
Aah hello, dear Sun, and as for the exclusion of the speculum, less is, after all, more.💇🏻♀️
The closest I have is here:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/315343-cuffs-and-speculum/
And thank you for stopping by.
~Jade👠
The closest I have is here:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/315343-cuffs-and-speculum/
And thank you for stopping by.
~Jade👠
11th Oct 2018 10:04pm
Jade. After reading this write I have just one question. 😳
"Will you marry me? 💏
"Will you marry me? 💏
11th Oct 2018 11:24pm
Ohh, snuggles, that’s so sweet of you, Kimmy... and thank you for the definitive invitation.
~Jade👠
~Jade👠
12th Oct 2018 3:43am
Oh my, oh my, oh my!
There will be more later, much more...
When I slip the bit!
Giddy up!
Thomas
There will be more later, much more...
When I slip the bit!
Giddy up!
Thomas
12th Oct 2018 4:47am
*clicks her tongue as she tickles tommy’s whithers with a colorful, tasseled, beaded quirt*
Mmmm, don’t make me wait too long, my ponycat.🐈💋
MsTigermilk🐅
Mmmm, don’t make me wait too long, my ponycat.🐈💋
MsTigermilk🐅
12th Oct 2018 10:42pm
"Without guilt" are the most important words here, seems to me, but the entire poem's a marvel.
Thank you, my crowfly friend, it’s always a joy to see you!
And I’m especially pleased by your enjoyment.
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( ❣️ )
And I’m especially pleased by your enjoyment.
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( ❣️ )
13th Oct 2018 2:35pm
Oh my! I thank you so much, my Lil’D... your enthusiasm excites me!
RL gratitude
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RL gratitude
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13th Oct 2018 3:18pm
Sorry for the delay, Miss,
It took much longer for my tail today -
there was no problem... I just wanted it to take as long as I could stand it...
😮😮😮🐎😘
It took much longer for my tail today -
there was no problem... I just wanted it to take as long as I could stand it...
😮😮😮🐎😘
Love how you couple your art with this magnificently metered and rhymed poem. This is the most literary dominatrix poem I've come across. Having read much in the genre I can attest your femdom poem as being the crème de la crème.
XoXo
John
XoXo
John
Thank you so very much, dear John, as you have come upon the diamond in my queen’s crown. I wrote it (early in my tenure on the Deep) long before its publishing because I wasn’t sure the site was ready for it. I’ve published it because I’m still not sure, but this way I finally find out. My findings? I could have posted much sooner but guess what? It was I that wasn’t ready.
Your words are such an honor to me. It has me wonder if you might add it to your RL, but it’s nothing to do with vanity. It just crossed my mind due to your obvious enjoyment.
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Your words are such an honor to me. It has me wonder if you might add it to your RL, but it’s nothing to do with vanity. It just crossed my mind due to your obvious enjoyment.
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Oh, thank you for suggesting I add this to my RL! Your poem appealed to my sub nature to women in a deep and lasting way. I have been reading femdom literature for decades and yours stands with the best. Just the title hinted to me what treasure laid within. What you wrote plucked my submissive strings as only a true domme can. And I was indeed thrilled. ;-)
XoXo,
John
XoXo,
John
11th Nov 2018 11:23pm
Anonymous
24th Mar 2019 12:17pm
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Ahh thank you, m’sistah. Took me a few minutes ( or hour) before replying... I took my leather switch outta mothballs to limber it up with a few flexes.
Oh yes, since I was 17, I lived the lifestyle. By the time I arrived at this site, I had gradually eased off, so I’m not officially active...
But - every - now - n’ - then..,
That’s why I’m pleased by your wanderlust that brought you , to this particular destination. Kinda gives one some further insight into the facets of a jade.
RL tap o’ the tit 👠💌
Oh yes, since I was 17, I lived the lifestyle. By the time I arrived at this site, I had gradually eased off, so I’m not officially active...
But - every - now - n’ - then..,
That’s why I’m pleased by your wanderlust that brought you , to this particular destination. Kinda gives one some further insight into the facets of a jade.
RL tap o’ the tit 👠💌
Anonymous
24th Mar 2019 1:29pm
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Oooh?
You mean Sherlock Holmes, the films that came out around the early 40’s? Was that... John Carradine? I never saw that one. Must go rummage for it over at YouTube, if someone posted the complete version. Whaddaya think?
👠💌
You mean Sherlock Holmes, the films that came out around the early 40’s? Was that... John Carradine? I never saw that one. Must go rummage for it over at YouTube, if someone posted the complete version. Whaddaya think?
👠💌
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24th Mar 2019 1:41pm
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