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Room for us
Let’s stay locked in this room
Of my mind
Where we can have
Sex with words,
Sex with thoughts
Where we are whatever we want
Not distracted
By trivial life
I know you want me
Your eyes cannot lie
We meet, you shake my hand
We say a word or two
But we are too shy, too reserved,
Too deprived
You will just walk away and leave
And so will I
So, let's stay in this room forever
In comfort, deeply satisfied
Where imagination is our pleasure
Not bothered by what is
And what is not allowed
Of my mind
Where we can have
Sex with words,
Sex with thoughts
Where we are whatever we want
Not distracted
By trivial life
I know you want me
Your eyes cannot lie
We meet, you shake my hand
We say a word or two
But we are too shy, too reserved,
Too deprived
You will just walk away and leave
And so will I
So, let's stay in this room forever
In comfort, deeply satisfied
Where imagination is our pleasure
Not bothered by what is
And what is not allowed
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Re. Room for us
11th Oct 2018 11:02am
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11th Oct 2018 12:52pm
Re. Room for us
11th Oct 2018 3:21pm
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Re. Room for us
A very sexy invitation. Would make an arousing note for arranging an assignation. Inspired this rhyming comment:
Give him the encouragement,
He'll pay with more than sentiment.
Let the room echo with the screams
Of realising wildest dreams.
Give him the encouragement,
He'll pay with more than sentiment.
Let the room echo with the screams
Of realising wildest dreams.
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Re. Room for us
11th Oct 2018 5:07pm
I love this Dutchess! It reminds me of “I Just Wish” a deeper mentally erotic connection between two people.
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Re: Re. Room for us
11th Oct 2018 8:33pm
Something like that, absolutely. Sex is not at all just body thing...
So much glad you love it! Tnx for RL.
So much glad you love it! Tnx for RL.
Re. Room for us
11th Oct 2018 6:01pm
This is how I've lived my life...too shy...too reserved...locked away in obscurity...
Beautiful Selena.
Beautiful Selena.
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Thank you, my dear friend. I'm so happy knowing you enjoyed it.:)
It seems impossible to reach our dream ...so it stays just a dream...
But it's a shame you didn't open and try...
It seems impossible to reach our dream ...so it stays just a dream...
But it's a shame you didn't open and try...
Re. Room for us
11th Oct 2018 7:52pm
Made me think of a chat room, skype, facetime or messaging. Brain is a very powerful sexual organ. Enjoyed your write.
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Hmm, interesting observation. It could be surely associated with that. Thank you very much!
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12th Oct 2018 12:59pm
Re. Room for us
13th Oct 2018 4:56pm
Oh ... Selena ... this is exquisite ... love the flow ... cadence ... great line breaks as usual ... the closing two lines left me fantasizing ... still ...
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Thank you, dear. Words just fell to it's place... I feel this and live this deeply... I'm so glad this poem touched you. Thank you for RL ♥
Re: Re. Room for us
13th Oct 2018 5:23pm
Don't you just love it when the words tumble into place ... when your soul whispers ...
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