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La Mode
You
Me
Are we.
That's all we need.
Everything else,
makes no sense.
Fit together like
ice cream and pie.
Well you are
the apple of my eye.
Not just a trend or a mode.
We are "a' la mode!"
Take a bite,
hot and cold.
Sweet and tasty,
enjoy before it gets old.
Me
Are we.
That's all we need.
Everything else,
makes no sense.
Fit together like
ice cream and pie.
Well you are
the apple of my eye.
Not just a trend or a mode.
We are "a' la mode!"
Take a bite,
hot and cold.
Sweet and tasty,
enjoy before it gets old.
Published 10th Oct 2018
Author's Note
Had 15 minutes between meetings. Thinking of a past tasty treat.
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Anonymous
10th Oct 2018 8:29pm
I loved this. No vanilla though! (Grinning)
11th Oct 2018 4:46am
Everyone has their flavor! : ) Thanks for the comment fine lady, and I do love the smell of vanilla.
11th Oct 2018 7:56pm
12th Oct 2018 00:33am
12th Oct 2018 00:38am
Well the poem reads on a high note but ends on a bit of a downer...with before it gets old..
Very perceptive, captured it exactly. Life sometimes throws you for a loop.
12th Oct 2018 3:17am
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Oct 2018 7:45pm
13th Oct 2018 00:20am
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18th Oct 2018 3:23am
19th Oct 2018 5:32pm
2nd Nov 2018 4:58pm
I enjoyed this very much..especially the ending.
''before it gets old''
Indeed...
''before it gets old''
Indeed...
Anonymous
- Edited 6th Feb 2019 11:45am
12th Jan 2019 6:37pm
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12th Jan 2019 6:40pm
10th Apr 2020 3:44am
I liked this, Vince. Especially the end... All good things come to an end, eh? Anyway, nice writing :)
10th Apr 2020 9:10pm
29th May 2020 10:37pm
31st May 2020 7:00pm
Just one bite then!! LOL. Thanks for the comment and sorry for the torment.
