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Dead By Dawn
Just one glance, she shatters me
My world turned in just one breath
She's almost perfect, seems to me
But the barkeep warns me that she's death
I still escort her to my room
And she then removes her dress
I soon catch a whiff of doom
But I still feel no distress
She then takes me between her lips
Her tongue lavishing my modest length
My reason falters, slowly slips
But I can feel a growing strength
She swallows deeply, but won't stop
And I somehow remain quite firm
Once more she gulps down every drop
Then grins widely when I start to squirm
She decides to persevere
Just absorbing my sweet life away
I finally feel a growing fear
That I'll never see the coming day.
My world turned in just one breath
She's almost perfect, seems to me
But the barkeep warns me that she's death
I still escort her to my room
And she then removes her dress
I soon catch a whiff of doom
But I still feel no distress
She then takes me between her lips
Her tongue lavishing my modest length
My reason falters, slowly slips
But I can feel a growing strength
She swallows deeply, but won't stop
And I somehow remain quite firm
Once more she gulps down every drop
Then grins widely when I start to squirm
She decides to persevere
Just absorbing my sweet life away
I finally feel a growing fear
That I'll never see the coming day.
Published 9th Oct 2018
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9th Oct 2018 11:11pm
Anonymous
9th Oct 2018 11:18pm
Dearest Crowfly this is an erotic thriller. I love the combination of pleasure and, I dare say, impotent submission. The lady is definitely in a position of power and she knows it. And the man is powerless in her hands. Very intriguing indeed.
11th Oct 2018 3:49am
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