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A Deadly Mushroom
Blinding white dust
opulent sands
neatly encrust
the clear currents of peaking , reflective
salt sodden wet mounds .
Sunshine screaming ultra violet
through the celestine skies
above a fantasy islet .
Palm trees tilting
then the air starts melting
with an enveloping suffocating
mushroom cloud
it is dominating the now acrid and darkened
burning horizon of blazing
nuculear choked death.
We are inside a political ,volcanic mountain
ready to be dispersed like an over pressurised
blood filled fountain .
The number three will turn these beaches
into rancid decaying
black death filled peaches .
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Published 27th Dec 2009
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28th Dec 2009 1:46am
Great writing is hard to find. This piece is strong, well written, maintaining the coagulation of blood in the dead. How we burn for our sins, how we pay with our flesh. Bravissimo to this writer for divulging the blood on the sands.
Man is such a violent, destructive creature. Write on, poet. Write on.
Man is such a violent, destructive creature. Write on, poet. Write on.
28th Dec 2009 3:27am
Thankyou very much for your inspirational comment . And I don't think you could of described this any better than you did, exactly the view taken as I put this down to paper ,as I wrote it . Thanks again .. Paul..
