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me
this is how it goes
I sit down to write
scribble out a few lines
say no this isn't any good
scrap it
start over and repeat
the person I am
is a mystery to me
my personas still come forth
I guess I developed them at a young age
for protection
I know they entertain
but I pay a price
what I really meant to say
goes unheard
drops of water hitting the page
staining it
is my heart when it really speaks
tears have yet to fall
for all I've lost
my alter egos
must not interfere with life lessons
I need to learn
I want to know my own voice
is it really a mixture of my insanity?
am I really just a sum of this macabre show?
what am I afraid of?
I will begin psychotherapy soon
to find out where my rage comes from
somewhere inside
hidden beneath it all
is me
Written by
crimsin
(Unveiling)
Published 7th Oct 2018
| Edited 8th Oct 2018
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7th Oct 2018 2:41pm
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7th Oct 2018 2:49pm
thank you dearest Todski for your loving wisdom...without the drugs and alcohol I recognize there is still a matter of anger to contend with...I continue to have the drive to write but am unsure of myself at the moment...
I deeply appreciate the support...
love Brenda ❤
I deeply appreciate the support...
love Brenda ❤
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7th Oct 2018 2:53pm
yeah kind of scary though that...I will find the courage to understand it... if I don't i'll go back to drugging it which pisses of the feeling even more...
deep sigh here we go...
deep sigh here we go...
Re. me
7th Oct 2018 2:51pm
We are always reinventing ourselves as each event shapes who we are. It ain't easy, take your time.
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Anonymous
7th Oct 2018 3:52pm
I have only one thing to say. Love. You are love and now you will feel it forever. Your true voice is there. I believe in you. J
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7th Oct 2018 3:56pm
thank you dearest Dark Sun for the love it's deeply appreciated...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. me
7th Oct 2018 5:12pm
so courageous exposing yourself to random comments on your most intimate inner struggles....all will be well...
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8th Oct 2018 3:59pm
thank you dearest Lawrence I haven't been sober since seventeen this is new territory for me...I am still somewhat disconnected but hopefully somewhere there will be a meeting of mind and soul in me...
I deeply appreciate you...
love Brenda 🌹
I deeply appreciate you...
love Brenda 🌹
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Anonymous
7th Oct 2018 5:22pm
Wow, Crimmy!! Even just writing out your thoughts and feelings in prose form, you're words are so beautiful!
When you order a pizza, or something, does it come out in the form of beautiful poetry??!! Lol.
Honestly though, you're a beautiful person, I really hope you see that and get things figured out.
Love,
Matthew.
When you order a pizza, or something, does it come out in the form of beautiful poetry??!! Lol.
Honestly though, you're a beautiful person, I really hope you see that and get things figured out.
Love,
Matthew.
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8th Oct 2018 4:01pm
thank you dearest Matthew you know it's funny you should say that I dream poetry seriously...
I deeply appreciate you dear friend...
love Brenda 💕
I deeply appreciate you dear friend...
love Brenda 💕
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Anonymous
8th Oct 2018 4:27pm
Really? Wow, that's awesome Brenda. It's your calling my friend.
Maybe there is a plan(but why does it have to be so painful??!! lol).
Love you,
Matthew.
Maybe there is a plan(but why does it have to be so painful??!! lol).
Love you,
Matthew.
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I have found that wherever it comes from, it's the rage that lights the fuse for the courage & determination to self-heal. Loving you on and through your journey. Josh.
(also, from Mary Oliver's poem "The Journey ...
"... but little by little / as you left their voices behind / the stars began to burn / through the sheets of clouds / and there was a new voice / which you slowly / recognised as your own / that kept you company / as you strode deeper and deeper / into the world / determined to do / the only thing you could do / determined to save / the only life you could save."
(also, from Mary Oliver's poem "The Journey ...
"... but little by little / as you left their voices behind / the stars began to burn / through the sheets of clouds / and there was a new voice / which you slowly / recognised as your own / that kept you company / as you strode deeper and deeper / into the world / determined to do / the only thing you could do / determined to save / the only life you could save."
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8th Oct 2018 4:04pm
thank you dearest Josh for the love and applicable quote...it's beautiful tender soul...
I deeply appreciate you being here...
none of need journey alone...
I haven't been sober since age seventeen
I'm grateful to have such beautiful soul's such as yours to walk with...
love Brenda 💕
I deeply appreciate you being here...
none of need journey alone...
I haven't been sober since age seventeen
I'm grateful to have such beautiful soul's such as yours to walk with...
love Brenda 💕
Re. me
7th Oct 2018 9:46pm
Poetry sometimes makes it easier to unwrap emotionally which is what you do here. Nice inward turning on paper.
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Anonymous
8th Oct 2018 2:53pm
My Beautiful Dark Angel, just wait until you see yourself. Really see yourself. And how amazing you are. How much you've overcome, how much you've taken on and all you're working toward now. You are radiant and strong. I love you
...ever your Willow
...ever your Willow
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8th Oct 2018 4:07pm
thank you beautiful Willow seems all of us are on a brave journey of awakening...
I'm so grateful for you...
I love you...
Brenda 💕
I'm so grateful for you...
I love you...
Brenda 💕
Re. me
9th Oct 2018 2:26am
You have multiple personas but the rage factor is doubtless intrusive. That's a biggie for me - fuming anger inappropriately manifested. That's one reason why I see a therapist, and out of necessity. In any case, I love and identify with this.
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