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Roses To Roses
The saddest people wear the brightest smiles
The brightest people tend to say the dumbest things
A being can build a fortune for themselves
and never feel fulfilled
A homeless being can have joy in their hearts
even sleeping in a cardboard box
When life gives you roses
Don't pick it
because thorns do prick
The brightest people tend to say the dumbest things
A being can build a fortune for themselves
and never feel fulfilled
A homeless being can have joy in their hearts
even sleeping in a cardboard box
When life gives you roses
Don't pick it
because thorns do prick
Published 5th Oct 2018
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13th Oct 2018 4:37pm
I like how this poem presents examples and follows it with the rule. Pretty cool. There's something to letting nature take its course, allowing all of its beauty and ugliness to show however it will. Something zen about that.
15th Oct 2018 4:09pm
13th Oct 2018 4:40pm
Nice poeting ... simple ... flowing poem ... cautionary tale in the closing ...
15th Oct 2018 8:32pm
