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enigma
I can't wrap my mind around you
an illusion of the stars
enigma born brother
navigating Saturn, turning the sun
my passion flares
in lust, I burn
tasting your flavor in cerebellum's keep
in deep with you
I falter by the sea of doubt
crashing into deception's wall
I can't go the distance
you take me by the hair
drag me further
your masculinity peaks
I struggle to my feet
wading in indecision's valley
you are the mountain to climb
if I am ever to see my promised land
god given man, forlorn woman
in the oasis of wonder
you give me succor
muscle from bone
marrow from heart
brother mine, you feed my need
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3rd Oct 2018 1:38pm
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3rd Oct 2018 1:40pm
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Anonymous
3rd Oct 2018 1:42pm
Welcome back my dear one. And what a comeback! Beautiful words and beautiful image. Faith in others can be a motor that keeps us going. Especially if we work together to protect each other as a team. Love is the most powerful means of survival. Hugs J
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3rd Oct 2018 1:44pm
thank you dearest Juvenalis for such a lovely comment beautiful soul... i'm happy to be back and feeling better... I missed you all terribly...
I cherish you 💕
love Brenda
I cherish you 💕
love Brenda
Re. enigma
3rd Oct 2018 1:49pm
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3rd Oct 2018 1:54pm
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3rd Oct 2018 1:52pm
What wonderful images you produced here. The tone and submission brings to mind old world Scottish and Irish. Feels like this should read in Gaelic. I find that they are the ones that love, fight, honor deeper than most.
My opinion anyways.
My opinion anyways.
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Re: Re. enigma
3rd Oct 2018 1:55pm
thank you beautiful Bonzi I love your vision and thoughts on this write... a Gaelic reading would be wonderful...
love Brenda 💕
love Brenda 💕
Re. enigma
3rd Oct 2018 2:11pm
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3rd Oct 2018 2:17pm
thank you dearest Lawrence I'm starting to feel like myself again...
love Brenda ❤
love Brenda ❤
Re. enigma
3rd Oct 2018 2:35pm
Loved this ink Crim, n I’m not saying that because I loved all the other ones before this! :)
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3rd Oct 2018 2:38pm
Re. enigma
3rd Oct 2018 2:59pm
Gotta love a man with tattoos, sigh...
Beautiful write, dearest Brenda!
I especially loved these lines:
"muscle from bone
marrow from heart
brother mine, you feed my need"
Love, Duende
Beautiful write, dearest Brenda!
I especially loved these lines:
"muscle from bone
marrow from heart
brother mine, you feed my need"
Love, Duende
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Re: Re. enigma
3rd Oct 2018 3:38pm
thank you beautiful Duende something about a man like this that just feeds my need 😈
love Brenda
love Brenda
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Anonymous
3rd Oct 2018 3:14pm
Crimmy!
Soooo good to have your beautiful heart, mind, and soul back on here!
You're still the best! Haven't lost a beat.
You're home, Kiddo! And you bring beautiful warmth to our home!
Love,
Matthew.
Soooo good to have your beautiful heart, mind, and soul back on here!
You're still the best! Haven't lost a beat.
You're home, Kiddo! And you bring beautiful warmth to our home!
Love,
Matthew.
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Re: Re. enigma
3rd Oct 2018 3:39pm
thank you graciously dearest Matthew for all the love you show me 💕
love Brenda
love Brenda
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Anonymous
3rd Oct 2018 3:32pm
Back with such a Wow factor. You keep this place afloat. I'll show you my tattoos if you show me yours lol. Seriously, so glad to see you back. Rob xx
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Re: Re. enigma
3rd Oct 2018 3:40pm
thank you dearest Rob for such a gracious comment... I love a man with tats ❤
love Brenda
love Brenda
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3rd Oct 2018 4:08pm
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3rd Oct 2018 4:14pm
Re. enigma
3rd Oct 2018 5:27pm
“Your masculinity peaks, I struggle to my feet”
Your skills of wordplay and emotional detailing are on blaze here, Crim. Top of your game, taking us all with you to play. Fantastic work
Your skills of wordplay and emotional detailing are on blaze here, Crim. Top of your game, taking us all with you to play. Fantastic work
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6th Oct 2018 2:41pm
Re. enigma
3rd Oct 2018 7:37pm
Like the others above, I'm delighted at your return, as good or better than ever. My favorite lines:
you are the mountain to climb
if I am ever to see my promised land
god given man, forlorn woman
in the oasis of wonder
you give me succor
A fine love poem, more than worthy of the RL.
you are the mountain to climb
if I am ever to see my promised land
god given man, forlorn woman
in the oasis of wonder
you give me succor
A fine love poem, more than worthy of the RL.
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6th Oct 2018 2:42pm
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Anonymous
4th Oct 2018 2:00am
Brenda.. when you come back, you always do it, as only you can do.. truly brilliant.. and beautiful like your soul my sister.. into my list it goes.. love you..
Dave
Dave
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6th Oct 2018 2:43pm
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24th Oct 2018 6:22pm
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24th Oct 2018 6:27pm
thank you graciously beautiful Nari you gifted me smiles today...
love Brenda 🌹
love Brenda 🌹