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Tornado of my Heart
You came
You left
You came back
You changed
You reversed
You rocked me
You broke me
You put me back together again
You
You left
You came back
You changed
You reversed
You rocked me
You broke me
You put me back together again
You
Published 1st Oct 2018
Author's Note
Muse, lose, reshape, wonder, ongoing, centered, more ....
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1st Oct 2018 2:06am
1st Oct 2018 3:11am
1st Oct 2018 2:28am
1st Oct 2018 3:12am
It's good Then not so good, perplexing actually. Have never been quite able to explain it ....
Thx for asking
Thx for asking
1st Oct 2018 11:00pm
thats the beauty and mystery of it....there are no answers it just is...<3
1st Oct 2018 11:30pm
1st Oct 2018 3:16am
Hot and cold was never my favorite spot to be in either ...
Good luck with your heart big papa!
Me likes :)
Love
Jackie xxxx
Good luck with your heart big papa!
Me likes :)
Love
Jackie xxxx
1st Oct 2018 3:27am
Yo mama
It can be intense, she keeps me on my toes but she also disappears a lot ...
Part time muse perhaps now
X
It can be intense, she keeps me on my toes but she also disappears a lot ...
Part time muse perhaps now
X
1st Oct 2018 11:15am
Love this
I’ve had a tornado in the past...sometimes...tossed up and around is missed...sigh.
I’ve had a tornado in the past...sometimes...tossed up and around is missed...sigh.
1st Oct 2018 12:36pm
Thx B
A writer needs someone to write of, and to create stimulus ....
It's been Vs wild ride up and down and all around
A writer needs someone to write of, and to create stimulus ....
It's been Vs wild ride up and down and all around
1st Oct 2018 3:04pm
Anonymous
1st Oct 2018 1:19pm
Man, the storms of romance !!
1st Oct 2018 1:31pm
1st Oct 2018 2:53pm
Intense, those storms of destruction and restoration.....
So much conveyed in so few words. Love.
So much conveyed in so few words. Love.
1st Oct 2018 11:32pm
Like trying to predict where a hurricane will strike down.
I'm used to chaos though, part of my DNA
Thx broken
I'm used to chaos though, part of my DNA
Thx broken
Anonymous
1st Oct 2018 5:03pm
Gotta watch those downdrafts and currents, they can be a bitch. Great little piece here. I'm a fan!
1st Oct 2018 11:33pm
1st Oct 2018 6:39pm
Sounds like quite a ride...this is how DUP feels...Never a dull moment...
Dark Sun
Dark Sun
1st Oct 2018 11:33pm
