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Falling
Falling ...
Into a whirlpool of emotions.
Falling...
I don't know what to do.
Falling...
You say you want me.
Falling...
Well, I definitely want you to
Falling...
Gotta clear my head
Falling...
Gotta hold on tight
Falling...
Because if i dont ...Ill be free falling all night
Falling...
Into a whirlpool of emotions.
Falling...
I don't know what to do.
Falling...
You say you want me.
Falling...
Well, I definitely want you to
Falling...
Gotta clear my head
Falling...
Gotta hold on tight
Falling...
Because if i dont ...Ill be free falling all night
Falling...
Published 27th Sep 2018
Author's Note
When falling in love alot can happen these thoughts are exactly what most people think about
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27th Sep 2018 2:07pm
27th Sep 2018 2:52pm
Falling....
With remorse and pain
Falling....
With dark clouds and rain
Falling....
With death's new kiss
Falling.....
Why did You end this.....
Just an opposite poem I was inspired to write..... Don't worry I don't write repetition poetry..... I do like how you use your repetition in thus poem..... Feels like you're still falling.... LOL!!!! Great write
With remorse and pain
Falling....
With dark clouds and rain
Falling....
With death's new kiss
Falling.....
Why did You end this.....
Just an opposite poem I was inspired to write..... Don't worry I don't write repetition poetry..... I do like how you use your repetition in thus poem..... Feels like you're still falling.... LOL!!!! Great write
27th Sep 2018 4:25pm
Now this is tight work i say write it make the dark side show up please im ready to read this
27th Sep 2018 4:33pm
You have already written this piece..... If I write it it would seem as a copy of your work
27th Sep 2018 4:37pm
How about you write your version...like a response version because i just fell for the version you jus wrote
