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Blue Faith
the dawn ache for her daughter
trapped in the land of neither here nor there
she stood at the bridge
cast her eyes on the other side
there lie her freedom
among foreigners who speak a strange tongue
in a dialect, she can't fathom
she calls to them her language gibberish
only understood in the land of the forgotten
anxiety her native tongue
rage her solitude maker
with smiles that meet the eye
they invite her
she isn't sure she trusts them
pain her father
loss her mother
she will have to forsake all she knows
this is her last shot out of the blackness
the bridge out her faith
it's rickety and old
denial her captor
he denies her entrance
saying you won't fit with them
they are the elite born into a world of joy
you, my friend, were born to burn
she takes a leap
lands squarely on the bridge of faith
finds it's solid beneath her
she crosses confidently over
she hears creaking
one by one she tosses the secrets she's holding
she must enter bare
in truth and love
if they reject her now
she will be utterly and forever crushed
and humiliated in her honesty
the lady is me
I'm afraid, the dawn is weeping
it's blue, the day of my awakening
here I come, forgive me if I don't believe your smile
Written by
crimsin
(Unveiling)
Published 26th Sep 2018
| Edited 27th Sep 2018
Author's Note
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O0YxeTjFn70
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Re. Blue Faith
Anonymous
27th Sep 2018 00:02am
Excellent my sweet Brenda. Beautiful leep of faith. I hope you are feeling stronger. I missed you so much, my friend. Welcome back my dear. J

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27th Sep 2018 00:09am
thank you dearest Juvenalis I'm feeling stronger not quite myself yet... hopefully I will feel fully myself soon...
love & hugs 💕
Brenda
love & hugs 💕
Brenda
Re. Blue Faith
27th Sep 2018 00:17am
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27th Sep 2018 00:19am
thank you dearest Thomas forgive me I'm not myself or even sure who that really is at this point... I deeply appreciate your love 🌹
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. Blue Faith
27th Sep 2018 1:13am
You're writing is as crisp as ever
Keep throwing that bitch down the stairs ...
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Keep throwing that bitch down the stairs ...
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30th Sep 2018 1:21am
Re. Blue Faith
27th Sep 2018 1:32am
Love it! I'm sorry to hear you have not been feeling well. Sending good vibes and healing your way.
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30th Sep 2018 1:22am
Re. Blue Faith
27th Sep 2018 1:34am
"she takes a leap
lands squarely on the bridge of faith
finds it's solid beneath her
she crosses confidently over"
"it's blue, the day of my awakening"
we walk thru the blue mist with our spiritual eyes closed
thank you for the journey
love
Jeff
lands squarely on the bridge of faith
finds it's solid beneath her
she crosses confidently over"
"it's blue, the day of my awakening"
we walk thru the blue mist with our spiritual eyes closed
thank you for the journey
love
Jeff
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30th Sep 2018 1:23am
Re. Blue Faith
Anonymous
27th Sep 2018 2:40pm
Leaps of faith are the most terrifying but they can reap the most amazing rewards, beautiful Dark Angel. You have so much strength in you, tap into that and don't forget where it lives. You can do this. I love you...
...ever your Willow
...ever your Willow

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Re: Re. Blue Faith
30th Sep 2018 1:24am
thank you beautiful Willow I get scared but I'm getting stronger and stronger...
I cherish your love...
love Brenda 💕
I cherish your love...
love Brenda 💕
Re. Blue Faith
Anonymous
27th Sep 2018 3:43pm
Crimmy!!! That's wonderful!!! You see!! You're even more brilliant than you were before!!
Fantastic!!! I honestly wish I could write like that!
Love you, my friend!! Very much.
Matthew.
Fantastic!!! I honestly wish I could write like that!
Love you, my friend!! Very much.
Matthew.

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Re: Re. Blue Faith
30th Sep 2018 1:24am
thank you dearest Matthew you bring me so many smiles I cherish you...
love Brenda ✨
love Brenda ✨
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27th Sep 2018 5:07pm
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30th Sep 2018 1:25am
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30th Sep 2018 1:26am
Re. Blue Faith
27th Sep 2018 9:25pm
Better days will always come after the storm...
Just think positive Crim...there is real beauty in your words...
Dark Sun.
Just think positive Crim...there is real beauty in your words...
Dark Sun.
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Re: Re. Blue Faith
30th Sep 2018 1:27am
thank you dearest Dark Sun you know you're right it's getting easier...
I deeply appreciate your thoughts...
love Brenda ❤
I deeply appreciate your thoughts...
love Brenda ❤
Re. Blue Faith
28th Sep 2018 00:09am
Marvelous, and the video only makes it more intriguing....
Can I just suggest that next time at your video in the multimedia section thus that it can be easy to view
Can I just suggest that next time at your video in the multimedia section thus that it can be easy to view
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Re: Re. Blue Faith
30th Sep 2018 1:28am
thank you dearest Poet the song kind of inspired me to write this however it's not my own...
I deeply appreciate your thoughts...
love Brenda ✨
I deeply appreciate your thoughts...
love Brenda ✨
Re. Blue Faith
28th Sep 2018 9:53pm
This is very detailed and well-drawn, taking the reader on a journey from personal hell to hope for heaven. What a trip
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30th Sep 2018 1:28am
Re. Blue Faith
Anonymous
29th Sep 2018 11:33am
You truly deserve to come out of this in the glow of a burning sun. You offer so much encouragement in DUP portal. I can confidently conjecture all are behind you.
I have an addictive personality. Vodka & speed (oft together) were my downfall. It's a bastard; a spiral to bring yourself back up, using those which brought you down in the first place.
I have an addictive personality. Vodka & speed (oft together) were my downfall. It's a bastard; a spiral to bring yourself back up, using those which brought you down in the first place.

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Re: Re. Blue Faith
30th Sep 2018 1:29am
thank you Rob what you said means the world to me...
I deeply appreciate your support...
love Brenda 🌹
I deeply appreciate your support...
love Brenda 🌹