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Forceful Feeling (Pastiche)
I may come well one day to feel your force:
Impetuous dew flows tender like rain;
The whip tans well, so it must mark my skin:
The sweet purr of flogger murmurs my pain;
I may come well as your expressive voice
Allows me no poise: am I in disgrace?
The turn of my head leaves artists no choice:
As they, just like you, put me in my place;
I may come well regardless; nuance shown
By shrugs of the shoulder and a kissed neck;
My face changes with moods; I hear you groan,
Delicate arrangements will turn to wrecks;
If your streams of need now leave me reeling:
You instruct my come with forceful feeling.
Impetuous dew flows tender like rain;
The whip tans well, so it must mark my skin:
The sweet purr of flogger murmurs my pain;
I may come well as your expressive voice
Allows me no poise: am I in disgrace?
The turn of my head leaves artists no choice:
As they, just like you, put me in my place;
I may come well regardless; nuance shown
By shrugs of the shoulder and a kissed neck;
My face changes with moods; I hear you groan,
Delicate arrangements will turn to wrecks;
If your streams of need now leave me reeling:
You instruct my come with forceful feeling.
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