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wars fill the news
the world’s in pain
what can we do
i don’t have
a vote, not
even a voice
i turn off the tv
cook dinner
light a candle
cherish the fact
i have water
and shelter
Think of the
ones who don’t
*for World Peace Day
the world’s in pain
what can we do
i don’t have
a vote, not
even a voice
i turn off the tv
cook dinner
light a candle
cherish the fact
i have water
and shelter
Think of the
ones who don’t
*for World Peace Day
Author's Note
Karsu - Raise Our Hands.
https://youtu.be/a3qFnSXLvjg
https://youtu.be/a3qFnSXLvjg
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21st Sep 2018 5:11pm
You have a good heart, Duende. You seem to live simply and are satisfied. You lament the shortages suffered by others. I think of Puerto Rico when I read this, and how help was so long in arriving and so much more is needed. A fine write, and very moving.
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22nd Sep 2018 9:28am
Thank you so much for your comment, Crowfly!
I live indeed simply, but far from satisfied. That's why I try to keep things in perspective. I worked with refugees... they don't understand we have stress, because we have a passport. Great to hear you thought this was moving.
I live indeed simply, but far from satisfied. That's why I try to keep things in perspective. I worked with refugees... they don't understand we have stress, because we have a passport. Great to hear you thought this was moving.
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Anonymous
21st Sep 2018 6:16pm
If only our love and compassion could cover the world and smother inequality and greed. A beautiful write, my sweet sister
...ever your Willow
...ever your Willow
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22nd Sep 2018 9:30am
Indeed, my sweet sister... if only! Happy to hear you thought this was a beautiful write... thank you for your comment and the RL <3
With love, Duende
With love, Duende
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21st Sep 2018 7:07pm
Simply spreading the love you have to give is doing more than you can imagine...now imagine it multiplied by the billions that walk this planet... yea, amazing huh? :)
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22nd Sep 2018 9:35am
Mahatma Gandhi once said "The day the power of love overrules the love of power, the world will know peace" I thought about that when I read your comment... we have a long way to go, but until then: let's spread the love :-)
Thanks heaps for your comment and support, my friend!
Thanks heaps for your comment and support, my friend!
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21st Sep 2018 7:22pm
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22nd Sep 2018 9:44am
Your "Thank you for a positive piece of poetry" gave me huge smiles! I'm passionate about human rights and equality and am grateful for the comments on this piece including yours, so: Thank You!
Sorry to hear you know first hand what hatred can do... hope you can rise above it!
Sorry to hear you know first hand what hatred can do... hope you can rise above it!
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21st Sep 2018 7:40pm
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21st Sep 2018 8:31pm
That is soooo good Duende - simple words communicating a simple and effective response to a world in overwhelm. Thank you.
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22nd Sep 2018 9:55am
Honored by the RL and your comment, Josh
This poem is indeed simple and was written much faster than usual... I went over it many times, but at one point I told myself "it doesn't need more"
Thank you so much for your support... I really appreciate it!
This poem is indeed simple and was written much faster than usual... I went over it many times, but at one point I told myself "it doesn't need more"
Thank you so much for your support... I really appreciate it!
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21st Sep 2018 11:57pm
OMG! Same wavelength!
Excellent write, Duende. Sometimes all we can do is light a candle and send forth our energy to join that of others. And, hopefully make a difference. ❤
Excellent write, Duende. Sometimes all we can do is light a candle and send forth our energy to join that of others. And, hopefully make a difference. ❤
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22nd Sep 2018 10:08am
Not surprised about the wavelength ;-)
Sometimes it's indeed all we can do. Light a candle... raise awareness... grateful for your comment and the RL add... thank you so much, Ahavati ❤
Sometimes it's indeed all we can do. Light a candle... raise awareness... grateful for your comment and the RL add... thank you so much, Ahavati ❤
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22nd Sep 2018 10:35am
There is... I think it's important to keep things into perspective... focus on what we do have in stead of what is lacking, to stand still by those less fortunate.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this piece, Todski!
Thank you for sharing your thoughts on this piece, Todski!
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22nd Sep 2018 10:44am
Dearest Melia,
Thank you so much for your kind words... I know this subject is dear to your heart and I'm not surprised you light candles too! I was raised catholic and even though I'm not religious anymore (not in the usual sense of the word) I still light candles ❤
Love, Duende
Thank you so much for your kind words... I know this subject is dear to your heart and I'm not surprised you light candles too! I was raised catholic and even though I'm not religious anymore (not in the usual sense of the word) I still light candles ❤
Love, Duende
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22nd Sep 2018 7:32pm
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23rd Sep 2018 8:59am
Thank you, though this poem is about sending out light, not sharing frustrations...