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Would She?
I would like to know her
Like..really know her..not just know of her
Before I make love to her
To the enigmatic She
Learn to appreciate her journey
Then take the precious time it would naturally take
To get her into a space
An area of genuineness and connectivity
Where she'd be willing
To let me taste her silky nuance
Go down on her and
Crown her clitoris queen of my night
Hmmm
She is glorious mystique
Personified
Standing out from
The local gentry of intelligentsia
Simply outstanding..sexy....multifaceted
A reservoir of esoteric richness
One would never suspect upon encountering her
So low key with her sexuality
That is
Until she let's you in
Mmmm..
I want to lick her truth
Let her spill her secrets on my tongue
Swallow her in my safekeeping
Hold her dearly as a lingering poem
In my tummy
Would she mind?
Hmmm..I do wonder
Published 20th Sep 2018
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20th Sep 2018 3:29pm
I do love this piece.... You speak of respect and patience, you must have a very high level of self control.... Great write
20th Sep 2018 3:39pm
Respecting what I desire is so intrinsic to my nature.
Thank you for your lovely comment and the add to your RL
Thank you for your lovely comment and the add to your RL
20th Sep 2018 4:20pm
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20th Sep 2018 6:00pm
Thank you for the high praise. Imagination is crucial to life.
Your namesake alone speaks to that Timagination
A treasure you are.
Your namesake alone speaks to that Timagination
A treasure you are.
22nd Sep 2018 12:43pm
This really stands out from other erotica I've read on here... sensuality at its best!
Beautiful phrasing and imagery, too many good lines to quote, so I'll leave it at: brava!
Beautiful phrasing and imagery, too many good lines to quote, so I'll leave it at: brava!
22nd Sep 2018 1:21pm
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3rd Oct 2018 8:24am
"I want to lick her truth"
That line in itself is so sensual...and your ink is sexy without being overly "sexual." Nice write love. Definitely got my attention. 💋
That line in itself is so sensual...and your ink is sexy without being overly "sexual." Nice write love. Definitely got my attention. 💋
3rd Oct 2018 9:29am
The truth is in the orgasm.
Overly ''sexual'' ....mmmm...now there's a sexy ring to things.
I will definitely be fanning your pages in the near future.
Nice to have your attention. You certainly have mines as well.
Overly ''sexual'' ....mmmm...now there's a sexy ring to things.
I will definitely be fanning your pages in the near future.
Nice to have your attention. You certainly have mines as well.
7th Oct 2018 1:03am
“I want to lick her truth
Let her spill her secrets on my tongue”
Dope ass line! Nice write
Let her spill her secrets on my tongue”
Dope ass line! Nice write
7th Oct 2018 1:24am
