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Commute

On my commute,  
music playing, hot wake-up in a cup.
"You shook me all night long" - AC/DC.
Makes me think back to her.
Met at a club, cocktails flowing.
For once, I was smooth.
She let me make a move.
 
Smile comes to my lips.
Right hand adjusts,
left hand on the wheel.
Feeling good, wind flowing.
Subliminal finger check,
her scent no longer.
 
Crap, was that a red light!
Music turned down.
Throat dry, cup to lips.
DaVinci_07
Written by DaVinci_07 (Leo)
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