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Even without a poetry site
I'll forever and a day
Continue to write out my rites
And fight my demons
One night at a time
Using insight and foresight
As a tandem to right this warring ship
Cast about turbulent waters
Pledging to become the light borne within
To help guide me back to steady shores
Remembering how bright the sun
Really does shines
Exposing the blight of the soul
Where I take flight
Within the contained knowledge of this self
Tempered with a sage's wisdom
Ascending new hieghts
Running freely again as the little girl within
Flying the multi hued kite that is Her
Original Spirited One
Published 18th Sep 2018
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26th Sep 2018 5:19pm
Continuity helps you to develop as a writer, so excellent topic with surreal decor.
26th Sep 2018 5:22pm
Yes ...continuity is essential. Thank you so much for your sharing insights.
2nd Oct 2018 11:53am
Such beautiful phrasing in this one!
"And fight my demons
One night at a time" > stunning lines... and so true!
"And fight my demons
One night at a time" > stunning lines... and so true!
2nd Oct 2018 5:55pm
