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Tore
She can't see her beauty
She doesn't know what she deserves
She is scared of a future
Where she isn't being observed.
She just wants him to see her
She just wants to be heard
She just wants to be happy
It shouldn't be that absurd
Love isnt a game of claims
Owning her or throwing the blame
Hitting her or calling her names
Yet she is the only one with the shame.
She isn't innocent
We all know it's true
She doesn't claim to be
Don't misconstrue
She does love him
She does care
she can't save him
She can't even repair
She can save herself
Maybe he will save himself too
Loving each other apart
Could be the only thing left to do.
She doesn't know what she deserves
She is scared of a future
Where she isn't being observed.
She just wants him to see her
She just wants to be heard
She just wants to be happy
It shouldn't be that absurd
Love isnt a game of claims
Owning her or throwing the blame
Hitting her or calling her names
Yet she is the only one with the shame.
She isn't innocent
We all know it's true
She doesn't claim to be
Don't misconstrue
She does love him
She does care
she can't save him
She can't even repair
She can save herself
Maybe he will save himself too
Loving each other apart
Could be the only thing left to do.
Published 17th Sep 2018
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18th Sep 2018 5:07am
Sometimes separating is the best way to show that you care. It's better to be good friends than bad lovers . We also forgot to point out that the flow was tight. Nice piece
26th Sep 2018 2:17am
sometimes in life we can't help but become attached to the people we love... we don't seem to see or understand that sometimes we are just drowning out their light in succession of keeping our love whole.... if someone says they need some breathing room or that they feel smothered, don't automatically take it that they just wanna break up, maybe they just need a little time to make sure that who they are with in the here and now is the one they want to be with in the future...… Very good read, you my dear show promise and are talented too...… keep giving us more to fill our poetic cup...
26th Sep 2018 1:41pm
