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Identity
If I could penetrate the masses,
Break some of our walls,
Learn to teach coming generations,
The values of morals,
In this defining time of science,
While religion slides it's place,
We no longer know our boundaries,
And we rationalise our faith,
Someone anew must bring forth,
A doctrine to suit atheist,
But in which not alienate,
Our common monotheist,
Everything belongs behind,
A banner of duality,
We are all individuals,
Accepting such leads to stability,
History has written of men,
Who shape and manipulate,
But such a force is our identities,
that no man can long negate.
Break some of our walls,
Learn to teach coming generations,
The values of morals,
In this defining time of science,
While religion slides it's place,
We no longer know our boundaries,
And we rationalise our faith,
Someone anew must bring forth,
A doctrine to suit atheist,
But in which not alienate,
Our common monotheist,
Everything belongs behind,
A banner of duality,
We are all individuals,
Accepting such leads to stability,
History has written of men,
Who shape and manipulate,
But such a force is our identities,
that no man can long negate.
Published 30th Oct 2011
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31st Oct 2011 2:11am
ur words simply amaze
& wil survive thru any phase
bcuz of da power which dey hold
its da truth many leave untold
but yet it is stil a lie
we eitha Believe or we dont...we Live or we die
der is no n between...no bridge 2 b built
& der r so many athiests n religion yet da Church gets da guilt
& da Church is not a building...dat idea is so feeble
In The Bible It Clearly States That The Church Is da people
da 1s who Believe....da 1s who Pray And Serve
And He Will Protect us n dis world even wen satan throws a curve.....
& wil survive thru any phase
bcuz of da power which dey hold
its da truth many leave untold
but yet it is stil a lie
we eitha Believe or we dont...we Live or we die
der is no n between...no bridge 2 b built
& der r so many athiests n religion yet da Church gets da guilt
& da Church is not a building...dat idea is so feeble
In The Bible It Clearly States That The Church Is da people
da 1s who Believe....da 1s who Pray And Serve
And He Will Protect us n dis world even wen satan throws a curve.....
31st Oct 2011 3:08am
I appreciate your reply in prose,
The effort gone in to compose,
I believe the church has dark sides,
That which from the world it hides,
"The Church Is da people " I've read that too,
And they shared all together, not just priest but me and you,
My words their intent was but to insist,
The divine needs its vessels, to us to act upon this,
Despite whips, chains, crosses, fire, machinations to oppress,
We'll win out as God wills it, to this I confess.
Jesus in the bible walked up hills, down streets, in synagogues, on water, but wherever he went he was always building bridges.
with taxmen and lawyers, fishermen and thieves, lepers and prostitutes, he never distinguished between any of these.
We are all Gods people, he put us all here in his name, and to understand one another not judge what each other is or not, as only one has the right.
The greatest gift he ever gave us was free choice, we never must take that from someone, it would put God to shame, for none of us understand ultimately Gods plan and how we or anyone else should fit in his grand scheme. :)
The effort gone in to compose,
I believe the church has dark sides,
That which from the world it hides,
"The Church Is da people " I've read that too,
And they shared all together, not just priest but me and you,
My words their intent was but to insist,
The divine needs its vessels, to us to act upon this,
Despite whips, chains, crosses, fire, machinations to oppress,
We'll win out as God wills it, to this I confess.
Jesus in the bible walked up hills, down streets, in synagogues, on water, but wherever he went he was always building bridges.
with taxmen and lawyers, fishermen and thieves, lepers and prostitutes, he never distinguished between any of these.
We are all Gods people, he put us all here in his name, and to understand one another not judge what each other is or not, as only one has the right.
The greatest gift he ever gave us was free choice, we never must take that from someone, it would put God to shame, for none of us understand ultimately Gods plan and how we or anyone else should fit in his grand scheme. :)
31st Oct 2011 3:23am
bro ur words r on point
as if God Himself Did Annoint
& i was not speakn of a Bridge For Those n need To Find Christ
i was talkn bout conformn 2 wut society deems as suffice
2 every athiest 2 every Saint da same is da way dat i am always replying
i Know im not perfect but i Love Jesus so u Know dat im Trying....
dats all any of us can do
i wil b me & i wil respect dat ur u....
as if God Himself Did Annoint
& i was not speakn of a Bridge For Those n need To Find Christ
i was talkn bout conformn 2 wut society deems as suffice
2 every athiest 2 every Saint da same is da way dat i am always replying
i Know im not perfect but i Love Jesus so u Know dat im Trying....
dats all any of us can do
i wil b me & i wil respect dat ur u....
