deepundergroundpoetry.com
Overdrive Suicide
I Been So Gone I Did Not Know I Survived
I Been So Dead I Did Not Think I Revived
Resurrection Infection With Some Pre Direction
Election Without Any Self Determined Inspection
Or Schooling Of What Should Be By Me Correction
I Want To Choose From More Than This Selection
Or I May Feel What Is Described Is Still Unsatisfied
And Leaves Me Deprived Yet Still In Overdrive Suicide
I Been So Dead I Did Not Think I Revived
Resurrection Infection With Some Pre Direction
Election Without Any Self Determined Inspection
Or Schooling Of What Should Be By Me Correction
I Want To Choose From More Than This Selection
Or I May Feel What Is Described Is Still Unsatisfied
And Leaves Me Deprived Yet Still In Overdrive Suicide
Published 16th Sep 2018
Author's Note
Known A Few , Been With A Few...
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 1
reading list entries 0
comments 2
reads 431
Commenting Preference:
The author is looking for friendly feedback.
16th Sep 2018 7:18pm
I would hit the brakes, Blackwolf. I believe I understand what you're going through, "I Been So Gone I Didn't Know I Survived" and the rest of your lines bring back both memories and present feelings. Excellent work! Please don't hit that overdrive...
17th Sep 2018 6:14am
I be okay CrowFly...Thanks...;)
Just been on overwhelm fo a long time...
Now , I am just finishing packing...
Will be midnite before sleep , at least ,
then up at 4:30 , to pack bags for travel ,
and last cleaning of house I sold...
At seven am on bus for hour and half ,
then another couple of hours on another
bus , then hotel for night , then 12 hr train
to Santa Monica , arrive about 9 at night...
Wait for friend to pick me up , then sleep by midnite...
Then hustle in L.A. , to make money...
Bonus : Bikini Clad Girls in sunshine...;)
Just been on overwhelm fo a long time...
Now , I am just finishing packing...
Will be midnite before sleep , at least ,
then up at 4:30 , to pack bags for travel ,
and last cleaning of house I sold...
At seven am on bus for hour and half ,
then another couple of hours on another
bus , then hotel for night , then 12 hr train
to Santa Monica , arrive about 9 at night...
Wait for friend to pick me up , then sleep by midnite...
Then hustle in L.A. , to make money...
Bonus : Bikini Clad Girls in sunshine...;)
