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2002 The Two
The turbulent two
Sweet little lambs
The screamer, the whiner
Small sticky hands
I want what she has
He took my toy
Do you want a cookie?
A girl and a boy
Sweet little lambs
The screamer, the whiner
Small sticky hands
I want what she has
He took my toy
Do you want a cookie?
A girl and a boy
Published 15th Sep 2018
| Edited 18th Sep 2018
Author's Note
This was written about my eldest two. The picture is of the youngest two.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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- Edited 30th May 2019 3:51pm
15th Sep 2018 6:44pm
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Anonymous
- Edited 6th Feb 2019 11:45am
16th Sep 2018 9:13am
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16th Sep 2018 4:30pm
16th Sep 2018 6:42pm
i love this snapshot into a memory. Powerful imagery and sentimentality that is subtle, beautiful poem
16th Sep 2018 7:58pm
