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In the mood
Josh's Tidings
The forefinger traveled across my battered back
Like a snail,
And I felt ripples of waves traveled within me
Like a plane.
18:09:13:10:03
The forefinger traveled across my battered back
Like a snail,
And I felt ripples of waves traveled within me
Like a plane.
18:09:13:10:03
Published 13th Sep 2018
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13th Sep 2018 12:55pm
17th Sep 2018 5:18am
Thanks Lil....
Was just thinking of writing something like this and the couplet popped into my head..
Was just thinking of writing something like this and the couplet popped into my head..
30th May 2019 5:11am
Rhyming comment:
Nothing better after a hard worked day
than a good back rub, pre hitting the hay.
Administered when that back is turned, nude,
It relaxes the spouse, gets them in mood.
Nothing better after a hard worked day
than a good back rub, pre hitting the hay.
Administered when that back is turned, nude,
It relaxes the spouse, gets them in mood.
17th Sep 2018 5:16am
17th Sep 2018 8:06pm
I have since posted a longer poem (A Good Back Rub) in this section using these lines as its first verse.
26th Jan 2019 10:06pm
26th May 2019 8:02pm
very few are able to express eroticae poetry
vibrations in few words
do you not shake along in poetry
as in verse
or just in love converse
till dew cummms
vibrations in few words
do you not shake along in poetry
as in verse
or just in love converse
till dew cummms
30th May 2019 5:13am
