Lost in Her

beautiful Duende so beautifully tender is your love
while being very sexy 💕

love you lady...

Brenda

Thank you so much, dearest Brenda!

It's hard to not love her...  love you too, lady 💕

Duende

is that you in the picture with your guitar?

Yes it is... thought about adding a picture later, but realised it could be confusing ;-)

you're so beautiful 💕

You're flattering me, lady 💕

A sensual crescendo played beautifully in your personification Duende

Those are some beautiful words... thank you so much, Tim!

A tender soul you are..this is a very gentle and loving piece.

Thank you for your smile inducing comment!

This piece was supposed to be gentle, glad it is received as such :-)

A sweet write, Duende.  I get lost in your poetry, and this rocks my day.  Excellent!

Getting lost in my poetry is a beautiful compliment, thank you so much!

Happy to have rocked your day, crowfly :-)

Thank you so much for your comment, my friend

I find her (music in general) to be very inspirational, glad you think this is a beautiful dedication!

Thank you so much for your extensive comment and the suggestions, Todski!

I wrote this piece in February, but wasn't happy with it. Went back many times, made a few edits here and there, but some parts kept bugging me to the point I almost threw the poem away.

The lines you higlighted (except for line 21) were the lines I struggled with most, so will make the edits you suggested. It's hard to look at your own work objectively, I almost went for honest critique with this one... almost...

Art is indeed an extension of self and as a music lover it was a matter of time before I bought my first guitar. I'm really glad you enjoyed this dedication and took the time to help improve her :-)

Such a tender poem with a hint of seduction in it. I enjoyed the descriptions you've used to portray your admiration and dedication to your ever faithful guitar.

Excellent work!

Such an amazing comment, LunasChild

Thank you so much... glad you enjoyed this piece!

Dearest Melia,

Your comment left me lost for words... I'm so glad you enjoyed this one and that you think I'm in tune with the music, music being so important to me...

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment... I really appreciate it!

Love and Light

Duende

I have to echo crimsin YOU are beautiful!! And this piece is amazing beautiful, bravo my dear Duende!!

Thank you so much for your flattering words, dearest lila lady!

Beautiful.....your words are like
an escape hatch from reality.

Escape from reality it is...

Thank you for the read and comment!

Thank you for your smile inducing comment :-)

I added the picture later, because I thought it could be confusing, but I forgot about those first 6 lines... glad to have tricked you, lol

Great to hear you like this one!

Love love love this

Happy you do, Ragnar... thanks for your comment!

giving birth to lullabies now that's a killer line damn so inch perfect

wow this is a great love poem

Oh, the smiles you brought me today :-)
The giving birth line is a favorite of mine too!

Thanks heaps for your comment and for taking her home with you!

Gorgeous! Music is the most incredible lover, is it not? Brilliant use of words and layout, lovely little sister. I've so missed you

...ever your Willow

Can't live without music! Thank you so much for your comment, it's good to be back and I'm happy you returned too :-)

Love, Duende

Quite clever on the descriptions and mixing of metaphors, Duende. What a yummy cocktail...

Great to hear you think this is a yummy cocktail :-)

Thank you for leaving your thoughts on this piece, Taurus!

Wow, that is one tremendous tribute to your lady six-string.

I should think Eddie Van Halen, Hendrix, Clapton, Satriani, Slash, Page, Beck, Lita Ford, Urban, Nelson, etc would give you a nod of respect on these words.

Lovely write, guitars can be erotic not only as phallic symbols but also their shape replicates the curves of a woman viewed from behind.