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When You Let Me In

while exchanging energy
we're becoming who we'll be
who we were just slips away
there is only here today

when you're thinking, I am too
feeling feelings just like you
in your mind and in your heart
in solar plexus, every part

intermingling forcefields spin...
I love it when you let me in
we are lovers, we are friends
at the start as something ends

every moment we are breathing
coming, staying and too leaving
every thought wave, each idea
although apart we still are near

we're exchanging energy
we're becoming who we'll be
intermingling forcefields spin...
I love it when you let me in
bcpoet
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