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etiology
my mother always
told me to chew
my food one
hundred times
before I
swallowed
I only chewed
ninetynine
...that must be
why I'm so
fucked up
(c) 2018 R.R. Zinn
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Re. etiology
9th Sep 2018 6:40am
Ninety nine is ok 👌👍
One hundred & one..that's the one to look out for..👎
One hundred & one..that's the one to look out for..👎
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Re: Re. etiology
9th Sep 2018 7:29pm
Re. etiology
9th Sep 2018 10:32am
My mom told me if i left home and forgot something and went back for it, i had to sit down before i went out again. I deemed the sit time at 9 seconds. After she passed away, I stopped sitting down, but I think about her each time ....
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Re: Re. etiology
9th Sep 2018 7:31pm
Did the sitting work?
Thanks for the comments PoetSpeak. Always good to hear from you.
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Thanks for the comments PoetSpeak. Always good to hear from you.
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Re. etiology
9th Sep 2018 1:20pm
Aristotelian logic; cause and effect axiom...
Wonderful parody!
(We're, simply, accidents and more - fucked up, that is)
Wonderful parody!
(We're, simply, accidents and more - fucked up, that is)
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Re: Re. etiology
9th Sep 2018 7:28pm
Thank you takis. Always good to hear from you. Always insightful.
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Re. etiology
9th Sep 2018 6:00pm
You may have started the practice of civil disobedience at an early age.
Bravo!
Bravo!
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9th Sep 2018 7:35pm
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9th Sep 2018 9:06pm
Re: Re. etiology
9th Sep 2018 9:17pm
Re. etiology
I think you have tremendous perseverance B-Kitty...
to make it to ninety and nine
My Mum told us, my sister and me...
"Chew forty times to satisfy me"
and I never made it past thirty-nine.! hugs... Ely
to make it to ninety and nine
My Mum told us, my sister and me...
"Chew forty times to satisfy me"
and I never made it past thirty-nine.! hugs... Ely
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9th Sep 2018 7:36pm
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9th Sep 2018 8:04pm