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The Wind and Us
Bitter cold breeze
Against my skin
It nips and bites
On sensitive flesh
Erect and tender
Suddenly it stops
It changes fast
Warm and fierce
The breeze is gone
Replaced by him
Dominant and Strong
Yet caring and soft
Never a misplaced hand
Just The wind and Us
🕷️ Scarlett Widow🕷️
Against my skin
It nips and bites
On sensitive flesh
Erect and tender
Suddenly it stops
It changes fast
Warm and fierce
The breeze is gone
Replaced by him
Dominant and Strong
Yet caring and soft
Never a misplaced hand
Just The wind and Us
🕷️ Scarlett Widow🕷️
Published 9th Sep 2018
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9th Sep 2018 8:21pm
A sensuous warm up you have described here. I see mental picture of a woman just undressed to make love under the stars.
15th Sep 2018 00:33am
9th Sep 2018 8:22pm
15th Sep 2018 00:34am
10th Sep 2018 8:40pm
Is this your first poem( the chill was most discernible a squall of feelings holding the winds and breeze to ransom)
15th Sep 2018 00:35am
15th Sep 2018 1:49am
15th Sep 2018 2:28am
14th Jan 2019 11:04am
14th Jan 2019 11:12am
No problem! When you have the time I hope you extend the same courtesy :)
