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ROOT
I am a root
Slipping through
A crevice
In this
Forest floor
I dive into
An endless kiss
Of moistened lips
To find the source of
Spring
Slipping through
A crevice
In this
Forest floor
I dive into
An endless kiss
Of moistened lips
To find the source of
Spring
Published 8th Sep 2018
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8th Sep 2018 10:49pm
Well done...you have a way with nature and eroticism...it's a forest fuck.
You paint vivid pictures with minimal words that conjure up a unique feeling.
You paint vivid pictures with minimal words that conjure up a unique feeling.
8th Sep 2018 11:54pm
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12th Sep 2018 4:47pm
i like this .. i like your wording throughout and it has a nice flow .. a good poem here
12th Sep 2018 5:17pm
