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The Clouds, The Ground And His Feet
During his downward tumble
from the clouds,
he thought,
at least, his feet
will experience a connection
to the solid earth
first hand.
As he came to it,
he planted his feet firmly on
the ground.
Soon the ground
moved under them, causing
loss of balance...
It was then
the thought hit...
It was his feet, not the clouds!
from the clouds,
he thought,
at least, his feet
will experience a connection
to the solid earth
first hand.
As he came to it,
he planted his feet firmly on
the ground.
Soon the ground
moved under them, causing
loss of balance...
It was then
the thought hit...
It was his feet, not the clouds!
Published 8th Sep 2018
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8th Sep 2018 4:59pm
Well, I suppose that if one were to be in a suitably altered state...
it might be easy to make that mistake...
It's a long way down... when you're high...
to the ground...
Your idea came across, loud and clear... your poem made me feel... vertiginous... Ely
it might be easy to make that mistake...
It's a long way down... when you're high...
to the ground...
Your idea came across, loud and clear... your poem made me feel... vertiginous... Ely
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- Edited 22nd Jun 2022 1:45pm
17th Sep 2018 7:05pm
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