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no other way
an old pair of shoes
sit across the room
and dream of steps
not taken
a weary sun struggles
to maintain it's orbit
in the sky until evening
the mailbox is lonely,
the letters are despondent
the hours look in at
graveyard shifts where
the dead work
husbands and wives
battle over lives failed
the patina of days fade
the music fades
and finally,
the light fades and we
are left alone in our
darkness
this is always the
way it's been
this is the way
It is
this is always the
way it will
be
it can be no
other
way
(c ) 2018 R.R. Zinn
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Re. no other way
4th Sep 2018 11:03pm
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5th Sep 2018 1:56am
Re. no other way
4th Sep 2018 11:37pm
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5th Sep 2018 2:03am
Re. no other way
5th Sep 2018 00:11am
Well... dearheart... when one's road is going through a low spot, one can't see worth a poot... keep pedaling and with some momentum... you'll be up and out in no time... luv you... Ely
PS... You know, that's a pretty-damn-good poem too.
PS... You know, that's a pretty-damn-good poem too.
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5th Sep 2018 2:07am
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5th Sep 2018 2:38am
Re. no other way
5th Sep 2018 00:17am
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5th Sep 2018 1:54am
We all will face the ultimate change some day. It can not be avoided.
buddhakitty
buddhakitty
Re. no other way
5th Sep 2018 00:32am
like the poem, but not
sure I agree with the premise,
my wife and I are getting on
but we still get letters .. :)
sure I agree with the premise,
my wife and I are getting on
but we still get letters .. :)
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Re: Re. no other way
5th Sep 2018 2:15am
Your are fortunate indeed in your relationship. My experiences (and what I witness around me ) are different. Thank you for your thoughts. I highly value your poems.
buddhakitty.
buddhakitty.
Re. no other way
This is very Bukowskiesque...take that for a compliment.
I know the place you are talking about even though with slightly different stage and cast of characters.
A.
I know the place you are talking about even though with slightly different stage and cast of characters.
A.
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Re: Re. no other way
5th Sep 2018 9:47pm
It is good to know that I'm not alone and that another person has had similar experiences. Thank you Angelast.
buddhakitty
buddhakitty