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IN THE ZONE
Sweet intoxication
came to my lips—
you are high proof—
I'm breathing fire in
your hips
came to my lips—
you are high proof—
I'm breathing fire in
your hips
Published 3rd Sep 2018
Author's Note
(Performing a sexy rite)
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Anonymous
3rd Sep 2018 8:55pm
Damn sexy!
3rd Sep 2018 9:10pm
Thanks! Being inspired to write is second only to being inspired by spine-tingling erotica! You have been my muse a couple times now. Wild.
Anonymous
3rd Sep 2018 9:21pm
Oh wow...you sure know how to leave me speechless! Greatly honoured!🤗
3rd Sep 2018 8:55pm
4th Sep 2018 1:24am
4th Sep 2018 1:29am
Tempts me to rhyme:
Hey baby, can you feel the heat
As I am, kneeling between your feet,
Breathing the life into your core,
Makin' you come like the tide on shore?
Hey baby, can you feel the heat
As I am, kneeling between your feet,
Breathing the life into your core,
Makin' you come like the tide on shore?
4th Sep 2018 10:44pm
4th Sep 2018 10:48pm
4th Sep 2018 10:44pm
5th Sep 2018 3:49am
5th Sep 2018 4:10am
Thank you. I'll be posting a number of short erotic poems in the coming days, so if you like that style, stay tuned :)
Anonymous
- Edited 6th Feb 2019 11:45am
18th Sep 2018 10:47am
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25th Feb 2019 4:47am
Good point.
Question: where are you most fireproof?
(Gotta breathe this fire somewhere)
Question: where are you most fireproof?
(Gotta breathe this fire somewhere)
