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Teddy Bears Know Haikus 7.0
(i) Sad
When you're really sad
Unlike people they're there for you
Unquestioning love
(ii) Real
Some humans are ok
But you can't beat the real thing
Teddy Bears that's what
(iii) Stool Pigeon
Teddy is a snitch
He always reports the dog
For bad behaviour
(iv) Purity
They don't lie or cheat
You'll never be fucked over
Teddies are Sinless
(v) Hugs
Expert Teddy Bears
The best Huggers in the world
Warm, soft, free of charge
(vi) The Voices
Teddies tell me things
They tell me to do mad stuff
Not killing, hugging
(vii) Rose Tinted
Teddies remember
only happy memories
they remind me too
Published 2nd Sep 2018
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2nd Sep 2018 9:27pm
9th Sep 2018 4:08am
Anonymous
2nd Sep 2018 9:28pm
Aww teddy bears are smart ;)
I’d still recommend the dog though, they give even better hugs :P
I’d still recommend the dog though, they give even better hugs :P
9th Sep 2018 4:09am
be a devil, live life on the edge have both LOL :-))))
thank you glad you liked :-)))
thank you glad you liked :-)))
5th Sep 2018 7:42pm
so true , so true ! great poem :-) i love my teddie bears.. i have about four ...they are so soft and lovely to hug
5th Sep 2018 9:25pm
Indeed :-) - I have about 80 - see no you think I am a mentalist LOL
thank you for reading glad you enjoyed and thank you for the RL add
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thank you for reading glad you enjoyed and thank you for the RL add
:-))))))))))))))))))))))
5th Sep 2018 9:36pm
wow , lol.... thats amazing . i guess you are a teddy bear collector lol you collect them :-)
7th Sep 2018 3:20am
Such a sweet poem, David. It made me miss all of my teddy bears/stuffed animals. At one point during my childhood, I'd sleep with a panda bear, a polar bear, a pumpkin man and a puppy. I agree with your statements about teddy bears. They DO give great hugs and they don't judge you. On the contrary, they provide us with a sense of security.
Nicely done, and thanks for participating in my competition!
Nicely done, and thanks for participating in my competition!
9th Sep 2018 4:11am
thank you; spoken by your inner child. I don't trust people who don't like teddy bears LOL :-))))))
