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Down To Level
Sometimes
I pinch a dream
- I pinch it forcibly -
trying to bring it down to my
level...
I pinch a dream
- I pinch it forcibly -
trying to bring it down to my
level...
Published 2nd Sep 2018
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2nd Sep 2018 3:22pm
Yes. We need to be aware of what expectations our dreams hold over us.
Super well written.
buddhakitty.
Super well written.
buddhakitty.
2nd Sep 2018 10:08pm
2nd Sep 2018 3:38pm
Yes, sometimes I have to slap a dream....the tough ones don't respond to pinching.
Very well written...great image!
Very well written...great image!
2nd Sep 2018 10:09pm
2nd Sep 2018 4:23pm
2nd Sep 2018 10:12pm
Hahaha!
Thank you, dear Madame!
(Dreams are very sensitive, aren't they?...:))
Thank you, dear Madame!
(Dreams are very sensitive, aren't they?...:))
2nd Sep 2018 9:35pm
I first thought you had thievery in mind...
what with pinching someone dream out from under
while they slumber...
But now I see it isn't so...
'Twas your own dream you did demean...
while seeking to pare it down to a size you find... usable
Thanks for a great read, Takis... a poem for all seasons... Ely
what with pinching someone dream out from under
while they slumber...
But now I see it isn't so...
'Twas your own dream you did demean...
while seeking to pare it down to a size you find... usable
Thanks for a great read, Takis... a poem for all seasons... Ely
2nd Sep 2018 10:13pm
