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Ice Vice
Addicted to ice
I'm serious, I'm for real
You have no idea
How that shit makes me feel
Addicted to ice
Can't overcome that craving
You have no idea
Muffles my ranting and raving
Addicted to ice
Do you have some to share
You have no idea
I'll take it from anyone, anywhere
Addicted to ice
Imma keep this short and quick
You have no idea
I want some more from Sonic
.
.
.
.
.
Sonic is a drive up, food stop
Carhop place to go
They have the best crushed ice
Than any other I know
I'm serious, I'm for real
You have no idea
How that shit makes me feel
Addicted to ice
Can't overcome that craving
You have no idea
Muffles my ranting and raving
Addicted to ice
Do you have some to share
You have no idea
I'll take it from anyone, anywhere
Addicted to ice
Imma keep this short and quick
You have no idea
I want some more from Sonic
.
.
.
.
.
Sonic is a drive up, food stop
Carhop place to go
They have the best crushed ice
Than any other I know
Published 31st Aug 2018
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Anonymous
4th Sep 2018 2:45am
a complex addiction not well understood, a simple poem turning that complexity into water, simple and pure.. pun intended
4th Sep 2018 2:52am
Simple, not so simple. And pure.. evil...
But, actually this particular poem is honestly just about ice. Regular frozen water. I eat it all the time. I know, weird. But my poem Crystal View is about the other and much more serious and real.
But, actually this particular poem is honestly just about ice. Regular frozen water. I eat it all the time. I know, weird. But my poem Crystal View is about the other and much more serious and real.
