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Smitten

it's been a while
since I have smiled
at something you have written

today within
your new writing
the pulse of someone smitten

I always knew
we weren't the two
lovers lost and finding

the only fire
was our desire
to touch each other rhyming

when you let go
it was a blow
still I can remember

the feelings felt
always I melt
when warmed by loving's ember

now you write
in love and light
visions of transcendence

a garden where
your soul you bare
my heart in full attendance

it's been a while
since I have smiled
now I feel your feeling

the love you share
and write with flair
is love I find appealing
Written by bcpoet (Lawrence)
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