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DROPLET

Please have a long drink
Of the invisible ink
That I pen for you

Written by SatInUGal

(Kumar)

Published 25th Aug 2018

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Re. DROPLET

27th Aug 2018 6:55pm

Simple and legit, I like

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27th Aug 2018 7:08pm

Thanks. I was wondering if "long drink" in such a *short* poem was a problem. Decided to leave it that way.

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28th Aug 2018 5:53am

It takes a long time to perceive the strong message anyway

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