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Untitled 8-24-18
You're smooth as silk
On my naked body
You're hot as fire
Between my thighs
You're as fickle as the moon as my lover
Too many women can catch your eye
Your muses are many
Like my thoughts of you
Your thirst is unquenchable
A lot like mine
On my naked body
You're hot as fire
Between my thighs
You're as fickle as the moon as my lover
Too many women can catch your eye
Your muses are many
Like my thoughts of you
Your thirst is unquenchable
A lot like mine
Published 24th Aug 2018
| Edited 25th Aug 2018
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25th Aug 2018 2:04am
25th Aug 2018 8:33am
Just one correction to offer. The word "You're" means "You are"; therefore the words beginning lines seven and nine should read "Your".
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