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Standing In the Rain

For me her eyes have lost that shine
Love is gone, dead on the vine
Perhaps both of us have lost our verve
Or could be I get what I deserve

I follow her glory with rapt eyes
Recalling all my abject lies
She then denies I've done my best
It seems that I have failed her test

It could be falsehoods, or the drugs
When I ask she simply shrugs
Can't shame her when she won't explain
And leaves me standing in the rain
crowfly
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