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Making Me Hole
Can't you see my disgrace!
Can't you see my disgrace!
Can't you see?
You wanna cum in my face
You wanna cream on your dream
Make me obscene
You say that you love me
I want to fucking scream!
Your words say so much
So much more than your touch
Like broken glass in my skin
Digging deeper within
Shredding my soul
You're making me HOLE
Don't you want to come inside?
Don't you want to come inside?
Don't you want?
You wanna tear me open wide
You wanna crawl into the womb
Enter my tomb
This sanctuary's closed due to catastrophic doom!
My tears cried in vain
All the time, all the pain
Like broken glass in my skin
Digging deeper within
Shredding my soul
You're making me HOLE
Can't you see my disgrace!
Can't you see?
You wanna cum in my face
You wanna cream on your dream
Make me obscene
You say that you love me
I want to fucking scream!
Your words say so much
So much more than your touch
Like broken glass in my skin
Digging deeper within
Shredding my soul
You're making me HOLE
Don't you want to come inside?
Don't you want to come inside?
Don't you want?
You wanna tear me open wide
You wanna crawl into the womb
Enter my tomb
This sanctuary's closed due to catastrophic doom!
My tears cried in vain
All the time, all the pain
Like broken glass in my skin
Digging deeper within
Shredding my soul
You're making me HOLE
Published 23rd Aug 2018
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23rd Aug 2018 5:53am
Wow. I think you and I know both sides of the love coin. Sometimes it sucks, in fact, most of the time it sucks. But, if we're lucky to really feel true love at least once in our lives (which I did along time ago), it can still hurt but man, I consider myself pretty lucky. That's where I was coming from in my song. Keep up the poetry, you have feeling and write from the heart and those other dark places. -Max-
23rd Aug 2018 12:54pm
Thank you kindly, I actually have a much better outlook on things now, but this is a place where I've been and it shaped who I am. So, I figure its worth expressing.
23rd Aug 2018 9:23pm
23rd Aug 2018 9:24pm
Thank you. I do enjoy purging myself from time to time. I appreciate the encouragement.
28th Aug 2018 1:48pm
28th Aug 2018 9:04pm
