Innocence

Lovely, J.  

If you change like to as you'll pick up the assonance if as well as add alliteration to the a sound, while contributing to the consonance of the s throughout the verse.

❤📝

Thank you so much Ahavati ... i must apologize for my late response ... your comments and critique are always greatly appreciated. ♡x

Lovely haiku

Thank you so much SweetOblivion for your lovely comment ... again, sorry for the late response

simply beautiful - I could feel it :-))))

Thank you so much David for the thoughtful comments and the add to your RL .. humbled and honored  .. I apologize for my late response