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Muriwai Beach
The way you stare at me
Invite me in
I am yours
You know it
You own it
so hot
so sensual
so dirty
so forbidden
My panties are dripping
before you've even reached my lips
A pussy in need of cock
Your tongue knotted in mine
Nipples screaming
Slow motion entry
Wrapped in drops of cum
I fucking love you
and
I love fucking you
Invite me in
I am yours
You know it
You own it
so hot
so sensual
so dirty
so forbidden
My panties are dripping
before you've even reached my lips
A pussy in need of cock
Your tongue knotted in mine
Nipples screaming
Slow motion entry
Wrapped in drops of cum
I fucking love you
and
I love fucking you
Published 21st Aug 2018
Author's Note
For a boy from a girl - Time spent on a beach
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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21st Aug 2018 4:25pm
21st Aug 2018 6:58pm
21st Aug 2018 4:27pm
It's my day off and I'm enjoying all kinds of poetry and hotter the better, this certainly started with a one big bang :)
I like how unapologetically you said what you want to say in this poem. Rock on!
I like how unapologetically you said what you want to say in this poem. Rock on!
21st Aug 2018 6:59pm
Anonymous
- Edited 25th Oct 2022 6:45pm
21st Aug 2018 8:11pm
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21st Aug 2018 10:27pm
Reminds me of the sex scene in the Leonardo Di Caprio movie The Beach.
Like her last words, for their raw earnestness:
I fucking love you
and
I love fucking you
Like her last words, for their raw earnestness:
I fucking love you
and
I love fucking you
Anonymous
- Edited 23rd Aug 2019 11:45pm
22nd Aug 2018 11:46am
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Anonymous
- Edited 8th Nov 2018 00:49am
23rd Aug 2018 10:47am
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26th Aug 2018 1:19pm
27th Aug 2018 6:23pm
30th Aug 2018 10:50pm
Steamy and very visually written.... I really like your style of writting ....
peace an love
1ManView
peace an love
1ManView
31st Aug 2018 9:36am
Anonymous
- Edited 8th Feb 2019 10:53am
7th Oct 2018 00:38am
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