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Temptation
I know myself
Wondering aloud
The volcano of lust is burning
My personal control waning
Will I cave to the Eros of your flesh
It controls me
As I control you
You showed me some pictures
I'm detail oriented
How long before I'll need more
Temptation
The sweet spot of your aura
Calling me to the other side of the tracks
Destiny, fate, our story
Waiting to be completed
Wondering aloud
The volcano of lust is burning
My personal control waning
Will I cave to the Eros of your flesh
It controls me
As I control you
You showed me some pictures
I'm detail oriented
How long before I'll need more
Temptation
The sweet spot of your aura
Calling me to the other side of the tracks
Destiny, fate, our story
Waiting to be completed
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Speaking in Tongues
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Re. Temptation
21st Aug 2018 2:23am
you note imparticular gave me giggles :)
temptation of the flesh
I feel you...
that lust brings out the bad boy in you...
great write...
love Brenda
temptation of the flesh
I feel you...
that lust brings out the bad boy in you...
great write...
love Brenda
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Re. Temptation
21st Aug 2018 2:31am
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Anonymous
21st Aug 2018 4:53am
"Speaking in tongues" 😉 temptations...this is a very spicy and tasty write dear poet!
Super like👌
Super like👌
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21st Aug 2018 4:59am
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Anonymous
21st Aug 2018 7:40am
Just magical poet👌
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Re. Temptation
21st Aug 2018 6:32am
Sounds like she was luring you by 'sexting':
You showed me some pictures
I'm detail oriented
How long before I'll need more
You showed me some pictures
I'm detail oriented
How long before I'll need more
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Re. Temptation
21st Aug 2018 12:44pm
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21st Aug 2018 2:07pm
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21st Aug 2018 2:17pm
Thanks T
You made my day sweeter as I know you from long ago and it thrills me to see you back and reading me !!!
You made my day sweeter as I know you from long ago and it thrills me to see you back and reading me !!!
Re. Temptation
Anonymous
21st Aug 2018 6:19pm
Temptation is a heavy, heady thing...which way will it tip? Intriguing...
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21st Aug 2018 6:32pm