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Hourglass
When negativity senses
vibrations of sand
escaping the hour glass--
it hastens advancement;
Granules become barbs
malformed reminders
puncturing the calender
of its personal agenda;
their swollen restiveness
a relentless testament
of deflated attempts
Artists tumble ahead
despite resistance
Because. . .
Wisdom survives history:
suffering maltreatment
forgoing vengeance
patiently awaiting
that final grain
to drop thru
the pass
delivering Us
from a confined
global wilderness
to a higher purpose
joining words and truth
into a plethora of poetry
Yeah Buddy
~
vibrations of sand
escaping the hour glass--
it hastens advancement;
Granules become barbs
malformed reminders
puncturing the calender
of its personal agenda;
their swollen restiveness
a relentless testament
of deflated attempts
Artists tumble ahead
despite resistance
Because. . .
Wisdom survives history:
suffering maltreatment
forgoing vengeance
patiently awaiting
that final grain
to drop thru
the pass
delivering Us
from a confined
global wilderness
to a higher purpose
joining words and truth
into a plethora of poetry
Yeah Buddy
~
Author's Note
For my partner in all things: J
with love 💜
with love 💜
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Re. Hourglass
19th Aug 2018 00:38am
yeah, you can turn an hourglass
upside down, but it don't *
change nothing ..
*there I go again .. :)
upside down, but it don't *
change nothing ..
*there I go again .. :)
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Re: Re. Hourglass
19th Aug 2018 00:39am
Re. Hourglass
Anonymous
19th Aug 2018 1:50am
Ohhh, I like the sound of this! It's almost as if an amusement park ride; sliding through the shaft into a ball pit of poems!
Breathe and repeat after me : out with the "bad", in with the "good".
Negative Nancies bring themselves down hard through their own lowering of vibration.
Thanks you for such a masterful, beautifully crafted poem, Buddy! 💑💜
I Love You. 💜😙💋
Breathe and repeat after me : out with the "bad", in with the "good".
Negative Nancies bring themselves down hard through their own lowering of vibration.
Thanks you for such a masterful, beautifully crafted poem, Buddy! 💑💜
I Love You. 💜😙💋
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Re: Re. Hourglass
19th Aug 2018 12:49pm
Might as well have fun while a'wait'n!
And who better than with someone you Love? 😘💕
Thank you kindly, Sir. 😊
I Love You 💜😙💋
And who better than with someone you Love? 😘💕
Thank you kindly, Sir. 😊
I Love You 💜😙💋
Re. Hourglass
19th Aug 2018 3:33am
For you partner first, yes, as it should be.
Yet, we all get to taste the sweetness of you shapely poetry
regardless of how sour subject matter.
Nicely done.
Yet, we all get to taste the sweetness of you shapely poetry
regardless of how sour subject matter.
Nicely done.
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Re: Re. Hourglass
19th Aug 2018 12:51pm
Re. Hourglass
19th Aug 2018 7:23am
The running sands rub it in.....
Like the clever hourglass shape shown in your poem.
Like the clever hourglass shape shown in your poem.
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Re: Re. Hourglass
19th Aug 2018 12:52pm
Re. Hourglass
19th Aug 2018 1:51pm
Exceptional shape poetry, n content...
I’d say I’m surprised, but everyone knows your
a Goddess of Poetry... :)
I’d say I’m surprised, but everyone knows your
a Goddess of Poetry... :)
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Re: Re. Hourglass
19th Aug 2018 5:46pm
Re. Hourglass
Anonymous
21st Aug 2018 2:00am
Wow Ahavati.......had to think about your words.......luv the way you formatted this.......so many thoughts going thru my mind.......I wonder if our lives are in an hourglass of time.......as we never know when our lives will end........outstanding ink......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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Re: Re. Hourglass
21st Aug 2018 2:56am
Hey Flowergirl! 💐
Good to see you back!
Nope; we never know when that final granule will drop, do we?
Thank you for the visit; appreciate you and your words. ❤
Good to see you back!
Nope; we never know when that final granule will drop, do we?
Thank you for the visit; appreciate you and your words. ❤
Re. Hourglass
27th Aug 2018 00:18am