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Time Turns
Heading away time turns
the corner as visions rewind
frame by frame ticking
feeling out the feelings
once felt before
emptiness echoes
filling out
a blackened soul
light flickers
and tragedy triggers
past supposition
stuck and awkward positioned
I listen as nothingness roars
running out of time
the blindness soars
the corner as visions rewind
frame by frame ticking
feeling out the feelings
once felt before
emptiness echoes
filling out
a blackened soul
light flickers
and tragedy triggers
past supposition
stuck and awkward positioned
I listen as nothingness roars
running out of time
the blindness soars
Published 17th Aug 2018
| Edited 19th Aug 2018
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17th Aug 2018 5:56pm
It's true when they say life flashes all at once instantly at crucial moments in life when we see things for what they are.
you captured that brilliantly here and I appreciate how you carefully chose the right feel of the words to capture that image.
you captured that brilliantly here and I appreciate how you carefully chose the right feel of the words to capture that image.
17th Aug 2018 5:58pm
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- Edited 30th May 2019 3:51pm
17th Aug 2018 6:00pm
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17th Aug 2018 6:07pm
18th Aug 2018 1:59am
try listening to disturbed the light
after reading this poem I have that song stuck on repeat
after reading this poem I have that song stuck on repeat
19th Aug 2018 00:23am
18th Aug 2018 5:20am
19th Aug 2018 00:23am
