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I Call it Redemption "Light"
I used to spit in the face at the notion of redemption
Age has a funny way of cracking you across the face
What was a total no go back then suddenly has wings
Taking flight
I'm not gonna get any religion though
Not unless it comes with a discount
Reward points on my Amex Card
Happy Hours that are happy not just greasy chicken fingers
No, this time it's different
It's reflection with a cause
Ways and means, something for everyone
Kinder, gentler, a smile that says thank you
Age has a funny way of cracking you across the face
What was a total no go back then suddenly has wings
Taking flight
I'm not gonna get any religion though
Not unless it comes with a discount
Reward points on my Amex Card
Happy Hours that are happy not just greasy chicken fingers
No, this time it's different
It's reflection with a cause
Ways and means, something for everyone
Kinder, gentler, a smile that says thank you
Author's Note
You could also call it Diet Redemption, no counting calories either Bub
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Re. I Call it Redemption "Light"
17th Aug 2018 2:21am
I’ve had a lot of growing up to do these recent years. This seriously resonates with me right now.
Nice work.
~Eerie
Nice work.
~Eerie
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Re: Re. I Call it Redemption "Light"
17th Aug 2018 2:26am
Thanks Eerie
It's always amazing when the penny drops
Appreciate the read and comment
It's always amazing when the penny drops
Appreciate the read and comment
Re. I Call it Redemption "Light"
17th Aug 2018 2:33am
beautiful self reflection and realizations
doing the work Poet
and reaping the rewards I see...
awesome...
love Brenda
doing the work Poet
and reaping the rewards I see...
awesome...
love Brenda
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Re. I Call it Redemption "Light"
17th Aug 2018 2:37am
Re. I Call it Redemption "Light"
17th Aug 2018 2:53am
I have a question....is getting no religion. Meaning ur not gonna be screaming "oh God!"
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Re: Re. I Call it Redemption "Light"
17th Aug 2018 3:05am
Re. I Call it Redemption "Light"
17th Aug 2018 4:06am
LMAO....then what do u meanby not getting any religion?
Because I'm bringing the equip. And the ink
Because I'm bringing the equip. And the ink
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Re: Re. I Call it Redemption "Light"
17th Aug 2018 9:43am
It means, I can reform but I didn’t need the help of religion to get there. I did it myself without the money grubbing charlatans in my wallet.
Re. I Call it Redemption "Light"
17th Aug 2018 9:55am
Re: Re. I Call it Redemption "Light"
17th Aug 2018 10:54am
Re. I Call it Redemption "Light"
17th Aug 2018 11:41am
to each their own
live
and let live
and we'll have redemption
for the mankind
straight
and no bs ink.
like.
forced/imposed is fear
not redemption
live
and let live
and we'll have redemption
for the mankind
straight
and no bs ink.
like.
forced/imposed is fear
not redemption
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Re: Re. I Call it Redemption "Light"
17th Aug 2018 12:39pm
Re. I Call it Redemption "Light"
17th Aug 2018 2:33pm
Everything in moderation they say but some avenues are meant to be pursued deeper than others
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Re: Re. I Call it Redemption "Light"
17th Aug 2018 2:35pm
Re. I Call it Redemption "Light"
17th Aug 2018 3:52pm
"No chrome or white wall tires on the vintage GTO"
Yep, red lined Tiger Paws, good for 'hole shots' and getting to the finish line,... but age, like a good chute, keeps you out of the sand trap.
Nice reflective piece.
Yep, red lined Tiger Paws, good for 'hole shots' and getting to the finish line,... but age, like a good chute, keeps you out of the sand trap.
Nice reflective piece.
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Re: Re. I Call it Redemption "Light"
17th Aug 2018 3:55pm
I love writing about redemption, maybe that’s my religion ....
Thx for your comment
Thx for your comment