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pilgrim’s goodbye
Published 14th Aug 2018
Author's Note
Adapted from longer prose format for #movingon visual poetry comp
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14th Aug 2018 5:20am
Brava Rachelle! Wonderfully sensual piece. For whatever reason my favorite passage is "As if it were what it was. "
14th Aug 2018 1:19pm
Thank you so much! That line stuck to me, too, even though I first wanted to get back to it and tie it in a bit more cleverly. :). R.
14th Aug 2018 4:09pm
14th Aug 2018 11:09pm
15th Aug 2018 3:04am
But at least something to remember each other by until the next time you meet. ;-)
15th Aug 2018 7:05pm
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25th Aug 2018 9:59pm
8th Sep 2018 7:37pm
Love the play with contrasts here. And of course, the observation. Excellent!
10th Sep 2018 5:32am
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- Edited 8th Feb 2019 10:53am
11th Nov 2018 3:26pm
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