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she was a well written poem, she chose not to speak
with a drop of a comma
and a twist of the i
she brought a misplaced t
closer to the eye
yes
that
was not a mistake
it was indeed her lie
simple is the answer
she did that to deny
the world of the splendor
her worth higher than high
Published 11th Aug 2018
Author's Note
Some souls kick dust in the eye..to deny their presence, lest they be seen.
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11th Aug 2018 6:36am
Oh, next time I will refer to this poem, when someone points out my typos...;)
No...I get it. Clever....and I like the way you describe humbleness.
This is inventive writing.
No...I get it. Clever....and I like the way you describe humbleness.
This is inventive writing.
11th Aug 2018 11:14pm
oh Yes! please do....🙂
glad someone got it.
well, some souls purposefully stay hidden, their humility too dear to them to let go and deny any and all attention and affection to self..
inspiration is such a poet, soul am fortunate to have crossed paths with!
glad someone got it.
well, some souls purposefully stay hidden, their humility too dear to them to let go and deny any and all attention and affection to self..
inspiration is such a poet, soul am fortunate to have crossed paths with!
20th Aug 2018 2:09pm
22nd Aug 2018 6:52pm
ok...OK! i agree... but lemme tell ya...
you're not the first person in this world to call me an Ass!
My mum beat you to it...some 35 years ago..." COLD* you donkey...why did you this!"
:-)))))
*name changed for anonymity! ;-)
you're not the first person in this world to call me an Ass!
My mum beat you to it...some 35 years ago..." COLD* you donkey...why did you this!"
:-)))))
*name changed for anonymity! ;-)
