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Do You Need To Reiterate Your Foolish Fate ?
O The Inanity Of Humanity Raises My Profanity
Idiocy , Imbecility , Absurdity , And Asininity ,
If I Could Only Find Something More Than Pity
But I Keep Seeing Those Caught In Self Complicity
Some Playing With The Law Of No Good Return
Lighting Themselves On Fire To See If They Will Burn
Reaping Consequence Of Every Offense They Earned
Wouldn't You Think By Now Some Would Have Learned ?
Idiocy , Imbecility , Absurdity , And Asininity ,
If I Could Only Find Something More Than Pity
But I Keep Seeing Those Caught In Self Complicity
Some Playing With The Law Of No Good Return
Lighting Themselves On Fire To See If They Will Burn
Reaping Consequence Of Every Offense They Earned
Wouldn't You Think By Now Some Would Have Learned ?
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Re. Do You Need To Reiterate Your Foolish Fate ?
9th Aug 2018 10:32pm
Most of us, myself included, deserve such a fate. A rare style here, using caps to start every word. It gives it punch. Great job!
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Re. Do You Need To Reiterate Your Foolish Fate ?
9th Aug 2018 10:56pm
Re: Re. Do You Need To Reiterate Your Foolish Fate ?
10th Aug 2018 00:15am
If you think that is deep , Badger ,
you need to read my and other
member's poems...
I have others far deeper...
As far as to the point ;
Capping every word is my literary style...
Capping every letter is shouting and seen
by most online as rude...
You might choose to correct that before
someone here informs you less politely than I am...;)
you need to read my and other
member's poems...
I have others far deeper...
As far as to the point ;
Capping every word is my literary style...
Capping every letter is shouting and seen
by most online as rude...
You might choose to correct that before
someone here informs you less politely than I am...;)
Re. Do You Need To Reiterate Your Foolish Fate ?
10th Aug 2018 1:03am
by now you'd think we've but the truth is (warning signs are written upside down) we keep falling back in the same hole hoping to one day touch the sky
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Re: Re. Do You Need To Reiterate Your Foolish Fate ?
10th Aug 2018 1:07am
You mean if we dig all the way through the earth ,
we *won't* touch the sky ?
Damn , someone better tell Trump...;)
we *won't* touch the sky ?
Damn , someone better tell Trump...;)
Re. Do You Need To Reiterate Your Foolish Fate ?
10th Aug 2018 1:12am
only if we had enough shovels we'd dig our way to the sky but unfortunately some of us believe the earth is flat
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Re: Re. Do You Need To Reiterate Your Foolish Fate ?
10th Aug 2018 1:18am
Some believe it is hollow...
Now there is a poll ;
"Excuse me we are taking a poll ;
Is the earth flat or hollow ?"
Now there is a poll ;
"Excuse me we are taking a poll ;
Is the earth flat or hollow ?"
Re: Re. Do You Need To Reiterate Your Foolish Fate ?
10th Aug 2018 1:21am
Re. Do You Need To Reiterate Your Foolish Fate ?
10th Aug 2018 1:20am
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Re: Re. Do You Need To Reiterate Your Foolish Fate ?
10th Aug 2018 10:29pm
Always choosing to proliferate and
utilize a wider vocabulary , Bender !
Thank you...I recommend it as a regular practice !
utilize a wider vocabulary , Bender !
Thank you...I recommend it as a regular practice !
Re. Do You Need To Reiterate Your Foolish Fate ?
12th Aug 2018 5:26am
How... delightful...!
Despite the quite dark theme,
truth and agreed... mean...
Nice, Nice blackwolf!
Admire the simplicity yet the richness of vocabulary
and the rhymes....!
H
Despite the quite dark theme,
truth and agreed... mean...
Nice, Nice blackwolf!
Admire the simplicity yet the richness of vocabulary
and the rhymes....!
H
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