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Surprising the Rise

.
Allow you a moment
to reflect my want?,
I'll not do,
A winner I am,
I'll be surprising
but not playing,
My prize I'll take deep,
away from admiring eyes,
before you have time
to register a beautful rise
& my determined
struggle to do just
that when you do.
Written by Lookawaynow (Rose)
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