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Ridges & plumbed stretches
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My mind buried
In pillows
Thoughts of hand
hip measurements
Ridges & plumed stretches
Lubed on twinned
destinations for travel
Awaiting the door
You
Closing one when
opening another
My mind buried
In pillows
Thoughts of hand
hip measurements
Ridges & plumed stretches
Lubed on twinned
destinations for travel
Awaiting the door
You
Closing one when
opening another
Published 8th Aug 2018
Author's Note
Thoughts
Oh.. those thoughts
Oh.. those thoughts
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9th Aug 2018 7:12am
maybe it's because i'm a sucker for esoteric and concise writing. but, it's always nice to read something that reads like it's just as long as it needs to be and doesn't feel like it needs to be any longer than it already is to get a message across.
9th Aug 2018 7:26am
Really great comments GZ
Subtleties be the words to get the messages flowing 😊
Subtleties be the words to get the messages flowing 😊
