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She Was
To hold her
To kiss her
To explore her
To have her
...She was the sweetest thing he'd ever craved
Sparkling eyes of blue,
Twinkling brightly beneath the starry sky.
Pale white flesh,
Glowing and incandescent as the moon shone above
Sweetly did her voice sing,
Like music amongst the ocean waves as she would sigh
All of her was heavenly,
Beneath him as they laid on the sandy shore did he so easily fall in love
He had held her
He had kissed her
He had explored her
....She was the sweetest thing he'd ever had
To kiss her
To explore her
To have her
...She was the sweetest thing he'd ever craved
Sparkling eyes of blue,
Twinkling brightly beneath the starry sky.
Pale white flesh,
Glowing and incandescent as the moon shone above
Sweetly did her voice sing,
Like music amongst the ocean waves as she would sigh
All of her was heavenly,
Beneath him as they laid on the sandy shore did he so easily fall in love
He had held her
He had kissed her
He had explored her
....She was the sweetest thing he'd ever had
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Re. She Was
6th Aug 2018 11:34pm
Bravisima Pandora! This is quite the siren song. Your descriptions of her (you) are so alluring and I feel the emphasis on "had" and "was." I hope the love continued. Beautiful!
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Re: Re. She Was
7th Aug 2018 3:07pm
Oh thank you, sweet one! It was merely writing , portraying nothing that actually took place...just daydreaming sweet scenes
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7th Aug 2018 3:29pm
Re. She Was
7th Aug 2018 00:18am
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7th Aug 2018 3:07pm
Re. She Was
7th Aug 2018 00:26am
I think sometimes as men we forget the art of complete admiration, of the scope and dimensions a fully actualized woman exist within all at once. It's nice to see it articulated as you have done, and should serve as a reminder to beware and indulge in all there is to enjoy
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Re: Re. She Was
7th Aug 2018 3:10pm
I absolutely agree, thinking in a sensual essence isn't easy for some men, though I think many women fail as well. So sad to miss the best parts!
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7th Aug 2018 3:10pm
Re. She Was
Yes, Pandora I could smell the fragrance of the ocean and sense the foam slowly reaching two lovers-moonlight-is firelight passion. Keep writing and feeling. Your thoughtful use of words and imagery are well put.
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Re: Re. She Was
7th Aug 2018 3:13pm
These are the very compliments I wish for, someone vividly seeing and feeling my words. Thank you so very much for your insight!
Re. She Was
7th Aug 2018 8:53am
Echo mysticseduction. A tale of siren temptation succumbed to under the stars upon the sands.
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8th Aug 2018 2:14am
Re. She Was
10th Aug 2018 10:48am
Some deep Nostalgia here. I'm relating and now it feels empty around here.
Your words awaken hidden emotions.
Your words awaken hidden emotions.
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Re: Re. She Was
10th Aug 2018 3:09pm
Re. She Was
13th Aug 2018 8:40pm
A moonlight dream which encompasses me and enthralls my male body and heart. This is my favorite of yours. She reminded me of the woman in "Kiss of the Spider Woman". Truly a magical night filled with earthly delights. ;-)
XOXOXO
John
XOXOXO
John
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