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Naiveté
Step by creaky step
ascending the attic ladder
blind to inevitable blindness
bound for hell where sight won't matter
Undeterred, defying
ecclesiastical threat
I find my turquoise beauty
prepared to aid and abet
Simply plugging her in
swells my mortal measure
flip her switch she begs
to touch the buried treasure
Wearing only a gray rubber disk
tremulously caressing the length
lovingly, playfully pressing the tip
intensifying seismic strength
Oh sweet Elysium!
ecstasy beyond reason
pulsating away every care
in this blissful dry season
What have I done!
I am in big big trouble
when lost in joyous climax
puss from my tip did bubble
After watching the film at school
back up in the attic
we're cool
Published 4th Aug 2018
Author's Note
Just one of those life lessons and unnessesarily guilt ridden rites of passsge.
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5th Aug 2018 00:40am
Fine work Gahdess. Those films at school were pretty much a joke. Better off learning through personal experience, right?
The attic beats the classroom by a mile.
The attic beats the classroom by a mile.
5th Aug 2018 00:58am
5th Aug 2018 2:24am
That passage is coed, my friend, just different routes to the same destination.
5th Aug 2018 2:31am
6th Aug 2018 10:48pm
I really like the religious metaphors to intensify the harmony between sexuality and spirituality a teenager/young adult must reach. Is the attic a symbol for Nirvana?
6th Aug 2018 10:57pm
Thank you for your comment Tamz! Back then it certainly was Nirvana. You are so right about sexual-spiritual harmony. Would that were how it was taught. We are taught that sex is dirty and sinful instead of as a divine miracle.
